Reviews for Once Upon a Vampire Pt1 & Pt 2
silversimon chapter 24 . 11/28/2014
So are you making it more sexy or less sexy? Home will we be able the novel. Version? Thanks.
sargeant chapter 24 . 11/19/2014
I like the story would love to read more
twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
I was reading this over on TWCS. I thought it was complete but it is not. I am so very sad. I was truly enjoying reading your story. I am dying to know how Jasper and Bella made it. I loved all your POV's and the different mating traditions. I wish you would finish it. I just wanted you to know that you are a really good writer.
Imani Whitlock chapter 11 . 10/17/2014
The fuck he think this is. ...
Imani Whitlock chapter 2 . 10/17/2014
Holly freaking shit I would have,I don't even know just wow nice job.
Guest chapter 24 . 8/13/2014
Thamks for sharing your story
madwoman chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Kay so how about you actually put in the description that the story isnt finished. Don't waste people time with an unfinished story.
Sabella Rose chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I would be like YES! JASPER!
chaosrules1982 chapter 24 . 6/13/2014
hi hun i love the story can you let me know when the novel version is available as i would love a copy xxxx
Guest chapter 24 . 6/9/2014
Gothic-Angel342 chapter 2 . 6/4/2014
I probably would of had a heart attack with the jumpscare
Gothic-Angel342 chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
best prologue ever
Guest chapter 13 . 4/18/2014
This story was bad you made bella sound like she dose what her man all the time and that bad. :( (((((
DramioneLover96 chapter 14 . 3/7/2014
This is a piece of shit, Bella's too submissive, any other girl would tell jasper to fuck off, no girl in their right mind would let their mate fuck them in front of loads of people and they would not go to meet a father who let the cullens have her so willingly, you need to make this story more believable
Guest chapter 10 . 2/6/2014
love it!
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