Reviews for Once Upon a Vampire Pt1 & Pt 2
Guest chapter 24 . 8/13/2014
Thamks for sharing your story
madwoman chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Kay so how about you actually put in the description that the story isnt finished. Don't waste people time with an unfinished story.
Sabella Rose chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I would be like YES! JASPER!
chaosrules1982 chapter 24 . 6/13/2014
hi hun i love the story can you let me know when the novel version is available as i would love a copy xxxx
Guest chapter 24 . 6/9/2014
Gothic-Angel342 chapter 2 . 6/4/2014
I probably would of had a heart attack with the jumpscare
Gothic-Angel342 chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
best prologue ever
Guest chapter 13 . 4/18/2014
This story was bad you made bella sound like she dose what her man all the time and that bad. :( (((((
eastendersfan1996 chapter 14 . 3/7/2014
This is a piece of shit, Bella's too submissive, any other girl would tell jasper to fuck off, no girl in their right mind would let their mate fuck them in front of loads of people and they would not go to meet a father who let the cullens have her so willingly, you need to make this story more believable
Guest chapter 10 . 2/6/2014
love it!
Guest chapter 8 . 2/6/2014
I liked the humor in this chapter:D
Miss Kristina chapter 3 . 1/31/2014
Oh my lord, I dont have words that are sufficient to describe how amazingly good and inspiring your writing is! Truly mesmerising! Very well done!
LoveAnAngel22 chapter 22 . 12/15/2013
Really good story!
HLPotter chapter 24 . 12/11/2013
I love it
beth626 chapter 24 . 12/11/2013
awesome story! I want more...where can I get the novel version? pls pls pls
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