Reviews for Once Upon a Vampire Pt1 & Pt 2
Gothic-Angel342 chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
best prologue ever
Guest chapter 13 . 4/18/2014
This story was bad you made bella sound like she dose what her man all the time and that bad. :( (((((
eastendersfan1996 chapter 14 . 3/7/2014
This is a piece of shit, Bella's too submissive, any other girl would tell jasper to fuck off, no girl in their right mind would let their mate fuck them in front of loads of people and they would not go to meet a father who let the cullens have her so willingly, you need to make this story more believable
Guest chapter 10 . 2/6/2014
love it!
Guest chapter 8 . 2/6/2014
I liked the humor in this chapter:D
Miss Kristina chapter 3 . 1/31/2014
Oh my lord, I dont have words that are sufficient to describe how amazingly good and inspiring your writing is! Truly mesmerising! Very well done!
WhiteRose421 chapter 22 . 12/15/2013
Really good story!
HLPotter chapter 24 . 12/11/2013
I love it
beth626 chapter 24 . 12/11/2013
awesome story! I want more...where can I get the novel version? pls pls pls
elenalena chapter 9 . 12/2/2013
Damn, I really have to get back to work badly but I am addicted to reading this fic! I can't stopppp! Help! :( :D:D
elenalena chapter 6 . 12/2/2013
Love this!
elenalena chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
OMG! Fuqhottt! .wow! No more to say atm...
shewoolf chapter 24 . 10/18/2013
Wish I'd known at the beginning that this was just going to be stopped, cold, like this. Shame... it's a really good story. I hope that if you finish it, you'll put it back up here or let us know where to find it.

Catherine
kantorkan chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
this is a stupid story,I can't finish reading it .
kantorkan chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
Cradle robber.
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