Reviews for Bump in the Night
Shattering Desire chapter 2 . 4/18/2013
. . . this has literally made me cry and my nose drip with watery snot; and I am not exaggerating, seriously! Man, you have a way with words - I've read and quite possibly favourited a few of your other Supernatural fics - that twists my emotions to either happy or depressed. And this is coming from a girl that tends to mostly indifferent emotion-wise but extremely interested reading-wise whenever I am on FFNet. Does that make sense? If not, well, I don't know any other way to put it...

But oh well, just wanted you to know that you made me cry and this was amazingly well written and it made me feel as though [I] was the one being... well... abused instead of Adam.

... I feel as though I'm missing something in my review... oh well, this good enough for me.
Emmers224 chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
Oh you ruin me. This was bfheisixbjakakzn882),)/debagsaqt $! brilliant! And no that is not a typo. I just can't find the words to express my complete and total awe. Just genius. I love how the loss of a brother just drives both Sam and Dean to madness yet they both deal with the it in different ways. And poor, poor Adam caught in the crossfires of the crazy, twisted thing that is Sam and Dean. I'll say it again. GENIUS! :)
Amy chapter 2 . 9/19/2011
This is an amazing story! I was hooked from beginning to end! The ending was so dramatic but I wish there was more! Fantastic job!
Ihni chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Oh I absolutely ADORE the end sentence.
Aleesha chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
Hey! I just finished this fanfiction and Shiny Happy People, and I must say that they are some of the best fanfictions I've ever read. You have some serious writing talent! I'm glad you have such a fondness for Adam, because he really is an underappreciated character, and I wish the creators had elaborated on his story more.

Thanks for taking the time to write such awesome, well-written fanfictions, and write more when you get the chance :)
Laci chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
* in shock now* can't believe you actually had Adam kill himself. very sad, but good in a twisted way. you write Adam very well. i personally think he could go far in the series, but they just don't have enough time. i'd love to see him more often in the cannon plotline. we don't know him quite well enough yet, but he's a Winchester, which implies lots of issues and depth.

without a doubt, one of the reasons i love this series is how many different stories you could possibly think up by just twisting little facts or sometimes even without fudging the truth.
cookiechainsaw chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
Okay. My review for all your stories is in Capstone. Can't review now. Too emotional. Incredible talent you have.

"Ma'am, please, calm down. Tell me your location one more time."

"I'm at the Taj Motel on Highway 47."

"I've got a unit headed there now. You said there were shots fired, correct?"

"Yeah, yeah, one shot, about a minute ago, and—AH!"

"Ma'am! Ma'am! What happened? Are you alright?"

"I just… oh god... I… I… I heard another shot."

Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
(((Kripke is a massage therapist compared to my cruel tortures.)))

Bring it ! Let's see what you got. Hit me with your best shot!

*grins madly,wipes bloodspatter off face*

(((Maybe there will be a stray peg to hang coats or keys on and he'll land on it, choke and cough up blood as it stabs into his back and bursts from his front. He'll look down and bits and pieces of him will still be stuck on it, with more and more of him leaking out of the hole that it made, and he'll just hang there)))

Now that's what I'm talkin' about! Woo Hoo! *grins*

((("Adam," Sam says, frustration starting to drip into his tone. "There are just some things it's better for you not to know. Safer for you not to know. I'm just… I'm trying to keep you safe. That's all.")))

Holy shades of JW! That louse!

(("Ma'am, please, calm down. Tell me your location one more time."))

Ahhhhhh sweet murder/suicide.


Lovely angst. Sweet and juicy angst. Kill 'em all, let God(that dick) sort them out.

Choccy and peanut M&M's for you.

*smishes you and pats you* :) That's it, you haz to write more angst. Is sweeter than candeh.:)
Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Interesting how you've made The Win Bros both evil and Adam fearful and ineffectual against them.


I like! Moar! Darker! Moar evil! Moar twistedness!
Jessica chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
You are absolutely brilliant! I never thought I would actually take to a story where the brothers are abusive toward Adam or anyone for that matter, but you wrote it so freaking good. I just had to review this story and tell you so. I absolutely adore what you did and I so can't wait for more stories revolving around Adam 'cause honestly the kid doesn't get enough attention in the fan community. 3
LittleLoli chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
Mon dieu! That was both excellent and shocking. Parts were absolutely nerve wracking. Terribly disturbing, but marvelous at the same time. That second gunshot at the end was Adam, no?
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 2 . 8/6/2010
Oh, wow, excellent. )
BranchSuper chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
Whoa - dark is the word alright. Makes me glad that the show did not go this route. Still very powerful.
SlothKeeper chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
Thats such a sad ending. Poor Adam and Sam. It would've been sadder if it turned out Adam killed just himself instead of killing Sam. Now all of them are gone
Athena's Owl chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
Let's do this again.

Wow. Seriously, you have one scary mind. Everything just has to happen on a Thursday doesn't it. Even in this 'tornado-ravaged Kansas plain' to take a rather artistic and well-phrased leaf out of your book, you still manage to get a bit of irony/almost-humour in there.

Love, LOVE ambiguous endings. My personal first impression was that Adam had shot himself this time (say it ain't so!); but reading the other reviews it came to my attention that two other different scenarios are possible. Whether you decide to clarify or not (maybe more Bobby?) this is truly a wonderful piece.

One word summary: Wow. :)
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