|Reviews for Heroes And Friends|
| Ebby x Pba chapter 1 . 5/30
Ebby: *sad* *sniff-sniffs*
Purple-basketball: hey ebby?
Ebby: what, let me alone purple basketball?
Purple-basketball: Ebby, what happened...
Ebby: nothing happened?
Purple-basketball: let meee...
w-wha, ohh eb, your eyes of sadness crying too you?
wait a minute?
Purple-basketball: ebby, please tell me what happened, come on friend?
Ebby: ohh, *crying*
i'm really sorry?
okay okay okay please stop it, purple basketball?
come on, put yourself together!
cheer up kay?
tomorrow we're going dairy queen. and ignore for jessica varner!
please don't cry ebby?
Ebby: aw thanks purple basketball?
Purple-basketball: yeah yeah, your welcome?
and your happy now, ignore for jessica varner again?
Ebby: yes, best picnic?
Purple-basketball: yeah it sure was friend?
come on let's go watch youtube?
| RinRin chapter 2 . 5/12/2016
Although Karen's behavior is a little frustrating here, it really shows how a lot of the Turtles' actions, necessary for survival though they may be, would come across to the person it happens to. You've put us in a position where we're forced to see it from her point of view, instead of automatically getting to identify with the characters we're used to. So frustrating as it is, it's an interesting perspective and I definitely get where she's coming from, whether I want to or not. It's my second time reading this story and I have no doubt there will be a third.
| saentiel chapter 50 . 8/4/2015
*waves hand* Hi. I found myself here when I was on tvtropes. I was looking through the examples for the trope, "Oh crap! There's fanfics of is?!" Since I've been a fan of Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, and since I thought that I could send a link to my friend if I liked it, I decided to check your story out.
And like it I did. This story was just plain amazing. It wasn't just the tale of the turtles, Splinter, and Hun coming into our dimension. No, it was the tale of so many other things. It's about a single mother who can't forgive her husband for how he wasn't there for his son. It's the tale of the son growing up and making friends.
I was amazed by how in character everyone was. Raph had the accent that he's so well known for. Mikey acted the most like a teenager, like usual, and whenever he called Karen dudette, I would smile. Donnie was the one who acted the smartest-The main time I can think being with the chess game. Leo did a good job at being the leader of the group, despite the fact he was injured for several chapters. All of them were as I imagine the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles.
Speaking of injuries, I was also impressed there as well. You described the injuries they got very professionally. It took time for them to heal, like in real life. And you wrote as if you knew exactly how to fix them.
Being the optimistic person I am, I bet that Donnie managed to create the same device that brought them there, and the turtles and Splinter are like penpals with the Vincents.
I also loved what you thought about the fourth movie. Though I don't think I've ever seen it, I loved the way you tied it in. Bravo, Mikell. Bravo.
P.S. Now I'm going through your other works. I'm at the end of Mikey In Love. Good luck on your writing!
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/7/2015
(Donny talking to Karen about reading TMNT fanfiction)
(the indirectly addressed Tcest part)
| flikaroo chapter 50 . 6/6/2015
What an epic adventure. You really captured the turtles well. Indeed poor Leo, hurt from the start. And I enjoyed the OC's too. I'm glad that the young boy stayed with his mom.
| Leixym chapter 12 . 10/19/2014
Alright, I don't review as much as I should, and it's been around four years since this was updated/completed, but I do know a little Japanese. I'm still a beginner, but I do know eough to make some correctionns.
First, 'Miss Karen Vincent-san' in the previous chapter is a little...what's the word...? Ah, yes, redundant. -san is essentially Mr./Mrs./Miss all rolled into one.
Second, otou-san or tou-san might be a little more appropriate, as -chan is rather childish/feminine...it CAN also be used to indicate closeness, but -san would be more respectful.
Next, Kyoodai doko de should actually be something like Kyoudai wa doko desu ka? (with 'desu ka/ka' on the end, indicating that it's a question.) It might be something more along the lines of Anata no kyoudai wa doko desu ka? , with anata no meaning (I think) your, kyoudai meaning siblings, and doko meaning where.
I think the next sentence is mostly correct (except for the 'ka' after the 'desu'.) but daijoobu is actually romanized daijoubu, and the usual response is 'Hai, daijoubu desu.', though either the first word, last word, or both can be left off, and a simple hai or, hai, sensei isn't incorrect.
I'm not too sure about 'who are you.', though after searching it seems like the better translation is 'Anata wa dare desu ka?'
Aaaand again, just Miss or -san will do, not both...
I hope I helped! :D
| theLadyCheshire chapter 50 . 8/29/2014
well wrap me in foam and call me a turtle. that was awesome! i loved the little family dynamic that all the characters fell into so quickly, with Karen stepping into the 'mom' role as easily as breathing. the intimidating first meeting was well done too, very tense, and i could almost SEE Raphael barreling into the barn like a silent tornado. i did wonder about Splinter's injury- one chapter, Karen's worried he won't make it, the next it's as if everybody's forgotten about it. also, wouldn't an injury by cat be more along the lines of three parallel slash marks? *is definitely not an expert*
Overall, very good.
| Makokam chapter 50 . 2/4/2014
Well, this was interesting.
The end felt rather ant-climactic, to be honest. Not sure why. I think you might have kept the focus a little to tightly on Karen. Or, at the very least, didn't have her pointed in the most interesting direction at times.
Also, I have no idea if this was on purpose or not, but when it was revealed that Luke was 17 I stopped and went, "Are you - serious?!" Because I'd thought he was 15 at most. He sure didn't SOUND like he was 17, and obviously Karen didn't treat him like he was but that was a plot point. So...yeah. That was kinda weird.
I feel like the cougar was, surprisingly, not given enough attention. I mean, you mentioned it in the first couple of paragraphs and then when Splinter was revealed to be missing I immediately thought "Cougar". And every time after that I thought, "The cougar is gonna get Splinter." And then you mentioned the blood and the torn cloth and I was like, "DAMMIT THE COUGAR GOT SPLINTER!"
And then when Splinter is shown to be alive but not injured Karen was like, "Wow, what could have possibly happened?" And I was like, "COUGAR!"
And guess what? The cougar got him!
Why was nobody else like, "OMG! Our four-foot-tall, ninety-pound Father/Master who is also a rat is lost out in the woods while there's five feet and a 190 pounds of feline destruction roaming around!"
And John was suspicious as hell. "So, uh...yeah..if you see anything, and I mean ANYTHING weird, call me, kay? Like, seriously. Anything odd at all, let me know" I read that and was like, "Yeah...this guy totally has something to do with it."
I was glad to see you had a good reason for him to be working at the lab though.
I was also disappointed that there wasn't more of them seeing TMNT stuff. Like, the 25th anniversary movie. Especially after it seemed they all had gone through what happened in the first movie. But then...Mikey mentions being the Battle Nexus Champion. And then Luke mentions Donny getting sick which Raph promptly remembers followed by them getting existential and wondering if they're really real, but of course they are, cause they're here and flesh and blood...all which was happening in a fanfic. And I was wondering if they would "remember" any plot from any story or movie they were told about, like it really happened only they didn't know about it until it was mentioned and their world, lives, and memories is in a constant state of flux as various writers write new shows, movies, books, and fanfics.
But then that was more or less settled and shoved aside which surprised me because I thought that would have been a big plot point.
Anyway, a very good fic but I feel like it fell flat at points and just didn't live up to it's potential at time.
| Makokam chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Broken arm or not, I sincerely doubt that Leo couldn't have escaped that stall. I don't think I've seen a horse stall with walls more than seven feet high(unless they went all the way to the ceiling) and he's a godamned /ninja turtle/.
Anyway, aside from that, I really liked this. Very well written. Definitely worthy of the recommendation and I will continue reading.
Oh. One other thing. If Luke is a big fan of the Turtles...his mother would /probably/ have at least recognized the names even if she didn't recognize THEM.
| erica.phoenix16 chapter 50 . 4/10/2013
I really enjoyed this story. thank you. :)
| phoenix chapter 46 . 11/18/2012
i have read all of the chapters before this one before i saw this and just wanted you to now THAT YOU MUST NEVER STOP ARE THAT GOOD! P.S My favorite turtle is Rapheal. You make them seem SO REAL IT IS AWESOME! GOD I LOVE YOUR STORY.
| Yincira chapter 24 . 7/4/2012
Not only is this story well written, it also makes a lot of sense. This is the first time I've read the immune system issues of the "cross reality" set-up be addressed.
| luke chapter 2 . 4/16/2012
Im not going to make a full review of this chapter, i just wanted to note on how big of a coincidence this is. My name is also Luke, like your character, i am also sixteen years old, and i am also a ninja turtle fan. Can you believe that?
| Shayne Pratt chapter 19 . 4/7/2012
1. Love that song! Listen to it all the time!
2. Yay for not being the only one to carry all my stories and everything around like that.
3. Love this story!
| SailorSedna052 chapter 50 . 1/5/2012
I love it! I hope you make a sequel.