Reviews for The Most Unbearable Mission Yet
Soul Raider 116 chapter 1 . 6/28
Very good. I would suggest adding horizontal rules or some other barriers between sections where location or character focus changes. It would make it easier to follow. But the story thus far is great!
Infinitetive chapter 11 . 6/5
Best 86/60 story ever! :D
Guest chapter 11 . 1/25
That was a really great story! I really enjoyed it. I really love Fanny and Patton and wish there were more stories about them. I would really love it if you wrote another one about them!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
"Towards" isn't a word. Please use "toward" instead?
Marty522 chapter 11 . 8/28/2012
Just finished reading it. As expected, I highly enjoyed this story. The ending fit perfectly. Good stuff. :D
8660 lover chapter 11 . 1/7/2012
woah woah woah woah... so they're in the TND? both of them? cool B)
BlueButterflyKisses84 chapter 11 . 9/4/2011
That was really Good! I loved it :)
KNDnumbuh007 chapter 11 . 9/2/2011
it was all a test! omg what a surprise ending! good job! i like this chapter, it was soo cute! im glad that you updated when you could! update soon! unless it's over...
KNDnumbuh007 chapter 10 . 9/1/2011
Wow, I told you to update when u can and I can't even review once it comes out... So anyways! Right when everything was going right the villains come in and ruin everything and knocking them out! At least they kissed! On to chapter 11!
ch0c0late.chip.c00kie chapter 11 . 9/1/2011
AAAHHHH

it ended... .

oh well :P

i REALLY liked the way you made the whole mission a test

it definitely threw me off, and over all, i REALLY like this story!
LiebeMaja chapter 11 . 8/31/2011
I lovelovelove the ending! I liked the idea of a test, and the flashfoward was nice! I LOVE T-MUMY! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
numbuh310alltheway chapter 11 . 8/31/2011
AWWWWWWWW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The ending was so awesome! I honestly didn't see that first part coming. Very good idea! I most likely would have never thought of that... ;)

The dream was absolutely amazing! *C.L.A.P.S!*

lol, the skits always seem to humor me. I was a little surprised to see me but at least I got a face that I actually do a lot! XD lol!

Wally: So what's with Patdadi?

Kuki: What do you mean?

Wally: The name? Seriously?

Hoagie: It's his nickname he gave himself. Like I'm the Stud Muffin.

Wally: ...

Kuki: *looks at him expressionless*

Abby: ?

Nigel: *lifts brow*

Crickets: -SILENT-

Hoagie: Everyone's a critic... *walks off*

Wally: Woo! He left! Yeah! B)

Patton: Hey! What's the big idea? Gimme those! *snatches* B)

Wally: HEY! *snatches back* BD

Patton: *takes them back* BD

Wally: Grr... *takes them back and runs off with them* BP

Patton: Well I have better ones anyway. 8)

Wally: B0 I want those! *switches* 8)

Patton: HAHA! *runs off* BD

Wally: ...

Me: lol great story mi amigo! XD
MaxandFang101 chapter 11 . 8/30/2011
Very endearing nicknames they have for each other, oh, and Patton?

Patton: Yea-hey!

Me: -steals sunglasses- HAHA! The sunglasses are min-OOF! -crashes into a wall- I am also a bit clumsy...

Hoagie: Conga line! -grabs me for the conga line-

Me: Ahhh, dreams do cone true. :)
numbuh07 chapter 11 . 8/30/2011
Hey KNDFANGIRL!

that chapter was very unexpected i did NOT see that!

and patton/fanny is sooooooooooooooooooo cuteeee! lol please write more!

and its this going to be the last chapter?

and thank you for adding me in the conga line .

please update soon! :D
Fearofchicken13 chapter 11 . 8/30/2011
whoa surprise twist ending!

and I'm always watching you Wally...always

*in Wally's room*

Me: *evil voice* I'm under your bed Wally

Wally: *looks under bed* AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *falls off bed*

*in school hallways*

Wally: *openes locker* AAAGGGGGHHHHHHHH cruddy shelia! *slams locker*

Me: *inside the locker*

*Wally's uncles funreal*

Wally: *opens the casket* !

Me: *jumps out of casket* Surprise!

*At the park*

Wally: *reaches into pocket for gum, pulls out me* ! What the crud is wrong with you?

I loved how i was in the skit and the ending really shocked me, Patton knew! and i nearly died when Rachel was like

"Oh it looks like its time for a candy brake" or something like that when Fanny asked if they saw them in the cell. LOL LOL LOL

Wally: This story wasn't even about me!

Me: so?

Wally: I'm awesome

Hannah: At least you where in it!

Wally: who the crud are you?

Hannah: I'm hannah from operation snowing

Me: Oh yeah you where all mushy with Jimmy, ew! You will never catch me acting like that

Kuki: *screams* *pushes Wally* *walks off angirly*

Wally: What just happened?

Abby: Your in trouble now...

Hoagie: *laughing*
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