|Reviews for Indivious, Much?|
| What's-Yer-Offer chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
I love this story. It's probably the best RDR fic I've read. The characters seem just like themselves. Good show!
| momantaii chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
So, basically, I really enjoyed this and am really looking forward to reading the rest of it! While playing the game, obviously I knew John had a wife, but when I realized Bonnie had the biggest crush on him, I definitely fell for her... and was delightfully surprised to see this fic here! Yeah, my praise for you is a little biased on that note, but regardless, it was well written! I really like your portrayal of Jack's character, and John's thinly veiled aggression is very amusing. I'm impressed by the dialogue - the character's dialects is what especially immerses me into a story and you got it! Also, I like your title. :D So yeah, I'm very excited for your next installment and hope maybe this comment was nice to read...? hahahaha, yeah.
| CuteKittten chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Wow. This is amazing. I love Jack's character. It seems so ... right.
Hope you continue this ... I would love to know if Bonnie and John end up getting together.
But what happened to his wife? Or is that going to be explained later?