|Reviews for Untitled Pokemon and SSBB Crossover|
| doomsbane chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
your probably waiting for a title suggestion aren't you?
here's one: Familiar Faces
your stories good, but you need to give it more feel. Think of it this way, this story is a sketch, a good sketch that has been outlined and perfected, but still a sketch.
What you need to do is colour that sketch(sorry for the silly metaphor), describe what type of area their in, describe their clothes, how their feeling and such.
| RineTheHedgehog chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Looking Forward Since New Super Smash Bros Has Been Announced.
| Max Saturday burns toasters chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Please update :)
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
hhm as-for-this-caerooosover-paickua,s-first-feriand hhm i woder-ash,s-paickua-jump-on-to-ash&saumus
| Giggapuff chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON!
| Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Don't be afraid to add a little more detail and life to it! It feels like you're relaying a story you heard from somebody else you know?