Reviews for The Check Up
Violet Opage chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
The story had a good build up but the 'yare,yare' got a little bit too overused and kenpachi is not the type of character i'd expected to be 'dominated' because he is usually the one on top but great job nonetheless
NorthernShinigami chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
. . . Kenpachi in miniskirt?... *swallows hard and shudders ...and tries not to die laughing*
babblebuzz chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
LoL! I think I may die of brain yaoi awesome OVERLOAD! XD XD XD XD that was SMAZZY TO THE EXTREME~!
TerrorInYerTub chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I really like this story. the ending was the funniest part. X3
Totoromo chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I was kind of shocked at this pairing, but the two of the them give off "kink vibes" so I suppose it's not too far off the mark. It was awesome, thanks!
Jasherk chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
So hot! I like it. Super mega kinky kink! I even excepted the strange pairing.

I'd love to read more of yours Bleach fantasies.
Sergeant LemoOoN chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Wow! Amazing story! Loved it
Cat Streaked By Rain chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
This was most awesome.

And I'd really like to see Kenpachi in a schoolgirl outfit. . XD