|Reviews for be nice to your sister in law even if she is Jane|
| GoodGirlGoneBad1996 chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
Wonderful story though i do think Alec was a little harsh on her. He can have her lie or be disrespectful because both ain't possible.
I believe that an Aro and Esme story would be a good challenge for you. Or possibly Aro and Bella or Jane.
| DeeplyStained chapter 2 . 1/26/2012
Oh gosh! Continue! I can't believe Alec would do that. She should say to Alec something like 'you care way more about your sister then me.' or leave or something. I can't believe you did that without Shane getting punished! It was good but don't stop there! Please more rebellion from Bella and don't let him treat her that way! :( please continue
| WordsAsStrongAsSwords chapter 2 . 7/22/2011
i hate edward bella or jake bella pairings i luv tht u did an alec pairing
| gigipadaswan chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
I really liked that...there aren't many Bella Alec stories. I think you should continue with this,maybe add another chapter with fluff or even do anoter story with these 2 or maybe a Jasper Bella "lovers" story. Hope to read more in the near future :).
| lily drake chapter 2 . 6/11/2011
i had a cute idea bella adopted jane and alec when they were little and now there older and get into some much trouble bella has to spank thm both :) trust me my friends love that idea
| LoverOfThePages chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
You sick bastard. That was beyond fucked up. I hope you get married and they do that to you everyday. That would make me happy.
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| angel98 chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
this is a very goo d storie i think you should have some more chapters but it was good :) :) !
| selena chapter 2 . 2/11/2011
mabey you should do one wwith bella and felix or mabey brotherly love alec and jane btw great story i no what thats like
| GoddessOfTheMoon Not Artemis chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
This is retarded...you know what Bella was abused and she accepted it. You know those are the signs of someone who secretly cuts themselves and if this is like your life or something you should start. Razors are super cheap.
| goddess of the night again chapter 2 . 11/24/2010
I just read some of the reviews for this story and Ok, to the ppl who are writing bad reviews look I kno ur tryin to help her personally I'm worried too because of all her spanking fics but u didn't have to b so rude. You could have said nicely like
look, the story wasn't my type of story and I'm scared for u I'm scared that you are treated this way in real life and trust me.
This is wrong, I am very worried for u and If u r treated this way you should call the police
I write this in all sincereness and I am scared 4 u but the story was interesting lol and Alec is hot.. I feel sry 4 bella tho nut I'm jealous at the same time. Does that make sense? I'm in love wif Alec but Bella is very poorly treated in this story
| Xx-The-Goddess-Of-The-Night-xX chapter 2 . 11/24/2010
though i wouldn't mind being in that position hehe
| LoveLace143 chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
I THINK YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE STORY BUT MAKE THEM GET A DIVORCE LIKE WHO COULD GET AWAY WITH HITTING YOUR WIFE LIKE THAT , HE TREATS HER LIKE A DOG AND DEMANDS STUFF OUT OF HER IF THAT WERE ME I WOULD GRAB A KNIFE AND STABB MY HUSBAND TO DEATH OR AT LEAST CALL THE POLICE OR SOMETHING BECAUSE IT IS SOOOOOOOO UNFAIR TO BELLA , BELLA SOULD NOT BE TREATED THAT WAY AND ALEC DOES NOT DESERVE HER IF HE IS GOING TO TREAT HER THAT WAY AND BELLA IS RIGHT JANE IS A BITCH BECAUSE SHE KNOWS IF SHE DID THAT BELLA WOULD GET SPANKED BY ALEC , ALEC DOESNT EVEN TREAT HER LIKE SHE IS HIS WIFE MORE LIKE HIS DOG OR PET SO PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY BUT MAKE SURE TO LET THEM GET A DIVORCE AND MAKE SURE BELLA TELLS ALEC OFF BECAUSE ITS SO UNFAIR TO BELLA .
| MoonRiderXXX chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
no offence but i don't like the story that much cos bella just puts up with spanking. i'd rather she felt more distanced from alec
| XxPixiePowerxX chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
hmmm Jane and Edward i think would make a cute couple
| carter1018 chapter 2 . 10/6/2010
you should continue this story