Reviews for be nice to your sister in law even if she is Jane
MoonRiderXXX chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
no offence but i don't like the story that much cos bella just puts up with spanking. i'd rather she felt more distanced from alec
QueenElsaSalvatore chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
hmmm Jane and Edward i think would make a cute couple
carter1018 chapter 2 . 10/6/2010
you should continue this story
Demonic Angel 666 chapter 2 . 9/19/2010
Love the story, please update ASAP.

xoxo - Lauren Kelly
OnlyShayy chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Can you make this a story with a little more chapters when bella still can't get along with Jane and Alec spanks her
princecharmingstoolate chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
Oh. My. God.

This isn't written very well, honestly, and it's rather terrible.

I really hope that this isn't from experience and that you have never been treated like this. If you have, I hope this isn't how you reacted...
ahreyg chapter 2 . 8/11/2010
it is kinda sad but why would bella be with him if she's gonna get spanked by her own husband? pretty scary relationship but otherwise i really like your story
ToTaL aCtReSs chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I like Jane. Her story is very sad.
Missy789 chapter 2 . 8/5/2010
I would hate the guy end up divorcing him and telling hin to F*** off if it was me but good story.
pinaypinay chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
jeez,if Alec really loved Bella then he would't spank her cuz thats just PURE ABUSE .I DONT LIKE THIS STORY !
icul8er chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
yay!

awesome chappie!

i just luv the idea of Alec and Bella its so cute and so original; great job:D

write more soon
AgentDeimos chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
I don't usually leave reviews, but I just can't stand this. This story is abuse, pure and simple and disgusting. I know that in the 1600s this may have been accepted, and Bella's attitude may have been normal, but you did not write it like a period piece with content you disapproved of, you wrote it like it was actually a good relationship. And that, considering that today we know just how abusive that is, just how pervasive it is, just how damaging such an attitude is, is, as I said, disgusting. My idea for you: read up on healthy relationships and on domestic violence and date abuse, before you write any more stories that promote sexist, misogynistic, relationship ideas.
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
good chaqpter keep going!
pizzahut chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
amzign try jaocb and bella
Twilight-Addict1918 chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
You should do one with Edward and Bella, I like those the best :)

Loved this one too, amazing writer !
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