|Reviews for Don't Leave Me Again!|
| Amorette Asher chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
Oh yeah, every time someone talks is a new paragraph, so you just press enter and BAM. It magically looks longer and is easier to read. Yaaaayyyyy
| Amorette Asher chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
I think Magazines is wrong, even James Patterson jumps around with POVs, a lot of the best books do it. And no one will ever be able to pass off a perfect character that they didn't create because only James Patterson knows how they would react to everything, you can get close, but no one will ever get it. I like the story, it's good, I say the only thing you could do, unless you don't like that, would be grammar (But in reality as long as people know what you're saying and it's readable, little mistakes don't matter, real authors would have someone proffesional read over it) and making them longer, then people get to read more at a time! Yay 83
| hannah chapter 5 . 1/31/2012
lolololololol rofl dylan tiks jbs a girl, i agree wit him. omg i just agreed wit dylan, what has the world come 2!
| o chapter 5 . 1/28/2012
Do it max's point of view and then make her see fang and then Dylan asks her out and she rejects and says that she hates him! YES!
| Jonik-Chaos chapter 4 . 2/27/2011
Oka, i think i know wha your going to do. And i adivse not to, you have to be harsh to be kind. So, this story has no plot line, your all over the place! You cannot switch from POV to POV like that, and the song lyrics is just pointless! And the oly character you have that acctuly seems IN character, is well.. iggy. Max would never alow ipods- thier not practable! AND, as much as i dislike dylan he is NOT that jerkish? "Oh im soo "hot" NO! And, doing a chapter on dylan asking max out only for max to hve a long hard think about it is -cough pointless. Your just another fan girl, please. PLEASE. write better and give it some credibility! Good luck.
| x.X.xSmileYou'reOnCamerax.X.x chapter 3 . 7/24/2010
it's a good story. i like it, just work on the grammar aspects a little more. i would be a lot better then.
| HersheyBarzXo chapter 2 . 6/27/2010
lol i love this :) maximum ride is one of my fav series XD pls update sooon3