|Reviews for Chaotix Mysteries: Who Killed Charmy?|
| PaloozaChu chapter 2 . 4/11/2014
Vector, you baka. Can we see an update? Pleeease?
| PaloozaChu chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
What if Charmy committed 'suicide'?
| Bluemist45 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I bet Charmy was pranking them.
Make more Sonic fics please!
| Jay-Jay spark chapter 2 . 3/19/2011
It was kinda funny and i really think you need ta write sum mre
| Kaity the Chameleon chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Not a bad start, can't wait to see the rest of the story. :)
The only thing I can think to say is that sometimes it sounds a little like script...and Vector's very short mourning XD But still, great story!
| TheConsortium2 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Interesting. So far, it’s fairly decent. Although, Vector took Charmy's death fairly hard... but only for a few minutes.
Sonic's appearance spurs the readers interests, but once again, was it really necessary?
Oh, and about keeping the rating K... this is a murder mystery. I know that you're trying to make it appropriate for children, but instead of using condiments for blood, just say he was bleeding, don't go to extensive lengths just to avoid the presence of actual blood.
But aside from that, it’s a good start. Just lead with Vector's stick-to-it-iveness and let everything else follow suit. Don’t take anything I say personally, just put it into consideration.