|Reviews for Unplanned Paternity|
| Sorasdream chapter 5 . 3/8
I loved the birthday scene at the end of the chapter. It was so cute.
It figures that sunny Naruto would be able to move up a grade cause' he's so smart, lol.
| Sorasdream chapter 1 . 3/8
heh, Kakashi a dad, lol. Sounds great so far!
| konekoluvin chapter 1 . 3/3
Hello to you two,
I was just inquiring as to when you will be updating this story? I have been waiting and waiting because I am interested as to how this story pans out because this story was something that I was looking for in a Kakashi/Naruto father/son fiction. It has all the right elements and incredibly well worded for a multi chapter fanfiction. I just love the action and family moments and the interactions between characters and I am committed to seeing it to the end but it would be rather upsetting if you stopped writing.
other then that, I love your work.
| azure sea chapter 15 . 2/25
oh my, i wonder who "he" is... i hope it's not kakashi, but since it's about kakashi and naruto most of the time, i can nearly forsee the chaos coming... xD
it would be better if you keep this length per chapter, because one thing i hate when reading updated chapters is when the new chapter is much shorter than the normal previous ones. it's disappointing. not that your chapters are very short, just my opinion. :)
| azure sea chapter 12 . 2/25
totally understandable that you're ranting. at first i was suprised that kakashi was their teacher but then i thought "good thinking", because he was still protecting naruto and that was like killing two birds with one stone. nobody would realise the real reason why kakashi was their teacher
although i'm a fan of non-canon team formations, it's ok for me when there is a reason for it. i don't even like other formations if there is no reason behind that. teams were build to have a certain function after all.
some people will just have to realise that a good story doesn't reveal all the important plots! published books don't reveal all the plot at the beginning, either, to keep up the suspense.
please keep up the good work, you two!
| Tamani chapter 15 . 2/23
Love it! As for the length I like it longer like these ones, like you said it tides us over. I just cannot wait until you start the chuunin exams and to see what Itachi's new task is. I am all for screwing canon and writing fanfic. Especially if it means that Team 7 bonds and Sasuke doesn't leave to go kill Itachi because he learns to let go of avenging his family death and helps naruto when he will eventually find out that Kakashi isn't his real dad. Though I hope that never happens.
| Scoobygirl45 chapter 15 . 2/22
I love this story!
| XeniaKunoichi chapter 15 . 2/22
I don't know if you guys are still active, but I really would like to see how this story pans out! It's incredibly well-written and the characterization is spot-on, making for an interesting and enjoyable read. Keep at it!
| Kira Temeki chapter 15 . 2/15
It's unfortunate to see this story go so long without update. It was one of my favorites, and definitely one of the more promising stories of its type. I hope one day you'll pick up and finish off!
| Binksy chapter 15 . 2/14
This is a really good story and I'm enjoying it a lot. Very well thought out and well written. It's long but paced nicely and the character interactions are very canon. Also I like your sense of humor it's very witty. On another note your authors notes are coming across as aggressive and condescending; so I had to stop reading them. I understand that some people are unduly rude but still I didn't like reading diatribe at the end of nearly every chapter.
| Crystallea1321 chapter 15 . 2/10
So, wonderful story. It's really good and cute! Now what I would like is more! Please? Ka-san and Naru-kun (not -chan) are so cute and I love Hiashi and Tsume! So more please?
| Silvanon of the Orchard chapter 14 . 2/8
Yes, it's true, you have not one but two entries on my very short list of stories I like so much I reread them every so often. I just want to say again how very much I adore this fic! It's wonderful and awesome and I really hope you'll be able to finish it sometime. Thanks!
| needsmorepuppies chapter 15 . 2/7
so wait what happened with the puppy?
| Kotetsu Bushido chapter 5 . 2/3
haha, love how Hiashi's ready to raise some hell. Didn't expect that.
| lifelovelaugh chapter 4 . 1/30
awww this chapter is soo cute but kinda sad since naruto got taken but still sooo fricken cute :3