It's a good fanfic, plenty of drama and real-world problems

Posting this as a reply to Milikiana... It's okay with me if somebody tries "expanding" this, as long as I am acknowledged and preferably if there is some separation between my material and anything another author cares to add. However, it should be clear that there are certain kinds of "detail" I have deliberately avoided, and if someone wishes to go in that kind of direction, I would prefer it if he/she simply wrote an all-new story from my scenario.

Also: It's my observation that sometimes when a review is posted, the option of replying does NOT work on my end. I don't know why, or how one can avoid it, but please do what you can to check settings on your account before inviting a reply!

I really enjoyed the story premise but I was wondering if I could get permission to rewrite it and make it a little longer with more details? I would really like this to be the first fanfic that I take on to. . .

This story is so deep, you've got talent for sure its written just like one of those settlers journals.

What the fuck?

wait... WHO'S preggo? is it little rock? or has witchita concieved by miracle? ... ... anywayz... pretty good story... just a little too fast paced... other than that... great job... :) i was wondering if you'd be willing to read a story that i'm working on for the Naruto series... i'd greatly appreciate it if you'd read and review it... thnx

Dude this story is incredibly messed up if little rock is 16 then columbus is what 25 dude