Reviews for Jacob and 2 women
Martial Arts Student chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
It's a good fanfic, plenty of drama and real-world problems
David N. Brown chapter 6 . 12/4/2011
Posting this as a reply to Milikiana... It's okay with me if somebody tries "expanding" this, as long as I am acknowledged and preferably if there is some separation between my material and anything another author cares to add. However, it should be clear that there are certain kinds of "detail" I have deliberately avoided, and if someone wishes to go in that kind of direction, I would prefer it if he/she simply wrote an all-new story from my scenario.

Also: It's my observation that sometimes when a review is posted, the option of replying does NOT work on my end. I don't know why, or how one can avoid it, but please do what you can to check settings on your account before inviting a reply!
Milikania chapter 6 . 12/4/2011
I really enjoyed the story premise but I was wondering if I could get permission to rewrite it and make it a little longer with more details? I would really like this to be the first fanfic that I take on to. . .
OnlyIfItsRalphDoe chapter 6 . 6/1/2011
This story is so deep, you've got talent for sure its written just like one of those settlers journals.
Sven Thurston chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
What the fuck?
DarkAngel2345 chapter 6 . 8/29/2010
wait... WHO'S preggo? is it little rock? or has witchita concieved by miracle? ... ... anywayz... pretty good story... just a little too fast paced... other than that... great job... :) i was wondering if you'd be willing to read a story that i'm working on for the Naruto series... i'd greatly appreciate it if you'd read and review it... thnx
zeke09 chapter 3 . 7/26/2010
Dude this story is incredibly messed up if little rock is 16 then columbus is what 25 dude