|Reviews for Starcraft AU: Tiberium Galaxy|
| Guest chapter 29 . 5/7
This is fic have a good balance between action and character interaction
From what I see I think the Brotherhood seems to be using mostly C&C 3 era tech without the upgrades that in some respect make them superior to C&C 4 unit (enlightened with particle beam instead of cannon), but they also don't use C&C 4 tech on a regular scale since they still employ C&C 3 base and Militant in the defense of Bhekar Rho. So that gives me the impression that Kane want to throw away the old equipment before starting to use the new one.
Technology such as:
Energy shielding and more cloaking on vehicles (present and mass produced in offence and defence crawler and also Centurions hold energy shields that can bounce enemy attack back toward themselves and there are also energy walls everywhere)
Tiberium shell that corrode enemy armor and slow them down are used by at least Specter artillery and they need to deploy to fire in C&C4
Illusion (Tactical power in C&C4)
Reaper Cyborg are not slow firing, instead according to the Intel Database, they actually have superhuman reflexes and precision, in addition to their rate of fire and power,
"The Reaper's primary armament is a the Multiple Objective Laser System, or MOLS, a focused laser array linked directly to the unit's cybernetically enhanced cerebral cortex, allowing near the instantaneous acquisition and subsequently, destruction of multiple targets, even on a crowded battlefield. This system has proved especially effective against larger GDI combat vehicles, with the Reaper's ability to target multiple weak spots simultaneously allowing the unit to carve apart even the hardiest mammoth tank in a matter of seconds."
That is their tier 1 infantry.
Shouldn't militia be equipped like Devouts since Kane can already armed his followers with such in C&C 4.
Cyborgs have self repair on the molecular scale through nanites and Reaper Cyborg are reported in the Intel Database to be able to rise from the dead to their repair mechanism.
The flagship Jonah that I guess is an upgrade of Nod Leviathan should be using drones instead of normal aircraft.
Nod Incinerator Turret would be a good counter to Zerg rush since these turrets can cook them from the inside using micro waves and not only that they have also quite a long range (in game though) and large area of effect.
Shouldn't every Nod unit be equipped with stealth detection since they know that their enemy unlike GDI employ cloaking too?
Nod should be using Tiberium Control Network for free energy instead of having to mine them.
Basilisk Laser can bounce and automatically seek other unit (they target enemy in a precise manner unlike Prism tank beam)
Nod Venom should be using laser and rocket
Cloaking is not at all rare for the Brotherhood since they have at least use them for more than 70 years and Stealth tanks still confuse enemy fire if they drop their cloaks.
Nod defense in C&C 4 do not need external power source, if they cannot use that they can fall back to Tiberian Sun era laser turret that also don't need external power.
Nod confessors should use charged particle beam and cloak detection since engineers in C&C 4 have them and they are very cheap tier 1 unit.
Nod Scalpel is not present in the Nod against Protoss battle.
Crawler don't need Global Tunnel Network to operate, Nod can use Drop Pod delivery system like GDI or simply make them with burrowing equipment (Gideon's crawler can burrow and also have shield)
But it's okay, I don't care as long as the story is good.
And on what year did the Brotherhood get teleported to the Koprulu Sector, do they arrive just before the events of Starcraft game, before the Terran reach Koprulu Sector, or in 2077, since they to progress very little,which is unlike what we see in the RTS game.
Will there be Nod tech from Renegade, laser chaingun and automatic rocket launcher seems to be good addition to be add in there.
| Citizen Kane chapter 29 . 4/22
Where art thou!
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 29 . 2/22
Brotherhood of Nod. Truly they are wondrous. Kane is certainly charismatic, and the ideology of the Brotherhood is simply inspiring. Peace through power.
Enough so for me to wish the death of James Raynor for even calling the sacred Brotherhood 'Noddies'. The entire Raynor's Raiders should be flogged to death. Nova Squadron are simply a nuisance, especially the disgusting and vile Nova Terra, she should simply die. She has far too much plot armour, enough so that it makes it wholly uninteresting reading anything that concerns her. And well there is Gabriel Tosh who is a vermin that must be exterminated.
Strangely I founded Arcturus Mengsk, the one whom you demonised continuously to be my third favorite character (in order); Kane, The Commander and Arcturus Mengsk.
I do hope in the future the Brotherhood emerges supremely victorious. Otherwise it would be most disappointing, and it would have no point of differentiation from hundreds of other stories in which the apparent 'religious fanatics' lose.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14
I guess this series is in hiatus. :(
| Lone Gundam chapter 29 . 11/2/2014
Ok this fic is good, there is no disputing that. There's one fatal flaw; the is a C&C wankfest. I understand Kane had years to watch the Terrans and that makes sense, no one knew about the Scrin or their capabilities and that makes sense as well, Jim managed to get some Nod gear which helps a bit, but overall the C&C portion is kicking the SC portion in the balls repeatedly. If you decide to get back to this, plz have something to balance out this. Like you could have Kerrigan touch Tiberium and become a super Tiberium mutant and proceeds to convert the rest of the Swarm into Tib mutants, also taking control of the Scrin-controlled Zerg at the worst possible time and getting the Scrin numbers cut down even further. Even more importantly, have Kane make some fatal mistake down the road. I know it's scary to fight someone who is seemingly infallible, but even that becomes predictable and boring after a while.
| battlecruiser03 chapter 29 . 9/24/2014
| Dark chapter 29 . 7/6/2014
three words: "Thor ez HERE!"
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/2/2014
Sigh...another fucking idiotically goody two tissues OC -.-
| Lost Guy chapter 29 . 2/6/2014
this was beautiful... thank you... thank you so much...
NOW IN THE NAME OF KANE! FORWARD!
| devo342 chapter 2 . 2/5/2014
Zerg is plural already
| devo342 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
| Good chapter 29 . 1/21/2014
| Igo69 chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
blachimont well of course LEGION is far far more advance since it has tacitus directly connected to it, tacitus is data matrix from more advance civilisation, maybe it came from scrin. No body knows.
Btw it will be more logic if avatar adapt to another weapon by nano technology to syncronize it, rather than usin wires. Beside all of that i love this fic, i hope you update it when xmas come... It'll be like christmass gift XD
| Blanchimont chapter 29 . 12/17/2013
Hell yeah, you finally updated and this chapter almost make the wait worth it.
The Dominion is getting their ass kicked very badly at this point, the initial counterattack with nukes combined with the gravity wells is definitely deadly, if it wasn't for Akira's tactical thinking, I think none of them would be alive at the now-destroyed platform.
The Avatar warmechs makes their debuts onto the battlefield and wreck havoc on to the dominion ground forces, and I like the modifications you had done to them, making them much more versatile they ever before, a force to reckon with!
My only complaint about it would be intergrating protoss tech, I mean, sure, the brotherhood may had observed and maybe even studied some protoss tech before they revealed themselves but outright intergration is too far-feteched for me. Protoss tech are suppose to be more advance than Terran, even the brotherhood should be about 'half a tier' lower than Protoss( speaking of which, I think LEGION being 100X more advance than an Terran Adjuctant is too much, about 5-10X sounds better ).
Also, Protoss weapons are powered primarily by Khaydarin crystals which requires a measure of psionic ablilties to utilise, something only a very, very small numbers of Terrans are borned with, not to mention the circuitry maybe radically different compared to Terrans and even if the weapons are intergrated, without the proper power source, they will be weaker compared to the orginal( unless this is your intention ).
Otherwise, this chapter really makes my day, I understand you have RL to consider so like the many fans of this fic, I will patiently wait for your next chapter. Hope to see another chapter in a few months.
P.S The review numbe is also my PLSE Score. :P lol.
| CMVreud chapter 29 . 12/9/2013
Heavens, you write soo good that I now want to play.
It's making me sad that I can not.