|Reviews for Only Cowards Stay While Traitors Run|
| coldqueen chapter 40 . 6/2
I really liked this. I like that you didn't immediately jump into what happened between DG and Cain before he left and you kept that ambiguous feeling through most of the story, just hints of the end to come.
| Shadows-Fallen-Angel chapter 40 . 7/29/2014
I have read and am reading your other tin man stories. you have a talent for writing and scenery, of your works that I have read this one seems... dreary. no real ups or downs curiosity kept pushing me on to read and for all the sadness of the story the resolution feels weak. of anything I have read on ffn, this feels like a story of almost real life. everyday drowning. it is hard to describe. I cant say that this story is good. ... but I cant say that is was bad it just ... is.
this is well written
| tin-a-holic chapter 33 . 7/11/2014
I forgot to say it last chapter ... Hass!
| tin-a-holic chapter 40 . 7/11/2014
Oh my Ozma was this amazing! What a great journey down the yellow brick road. Love the imagery of the mural, should have said it sooner. The Ruby/ Silver slippers- just wondering what you were thinking of when you mentioned them. I feel like there is a story behind them.. ;p I also thought for sure there would have been some trouble they saw on the road with all of your allusions to it, not to mention your other stellar works. And his sister? Nice red herring, although I wonder... I'm a terrible instigator ;p
Thank you for the AMAZING! story!
| tin-a-holic chapter 32 . 7/11/2014
:) I thought you said there would be answers by now ;) I love the bread crumbs. This may be my favorite story of yours by far, maybe not I still have two incomplete stories to read... I know you love the mystery, the clues the chase but riddle me this will I be devastated if I embark on the next two tinman stories and find them, well you know... naked , vulnerable, undone? ;p
| tin-a-holic chapter 30 . 7/11/2014
yes please.. bring on some answers, oh thank Ozma!
| tin-a-holic chapter 29 . 7/11/2014
Always leaving us wanting more... you must be a story witch;) I know it's Cain's pov but what happened with DG and Glinda... oh my ... and the swoon factor of the last chapter yummy!
| tin-a-holic chapter 23 . 7/10/2014
| tin-a-holic chapter 14 . 7/10/2014
5 kids? That's crazy amazing I'm struggling with one toddler, five, you are now officially my hero.
| tin-a-holic chapter 12 . 7/10/2014
i love the tie in to the 'original'. can't wait to keep going...down the yellow brick road;p
| tin-a-holic chapter 11 . 7/10/2014
uhhgg... my heart... it aches so... you are a wicked tease I love it, more please... I think this makes me a masochist? ;p
| tin-a-holic chapter 10 . 7/10/2014
Okay I realized what it is with this story that really gets me going, in a great way. It's your incredible attention to the small, in just enough ways where it adds to the story in it's reinforcement of ideas. (I'm sure there is a more apt word describing this, but I'm not a writer so I'm not aware of it;) What I mean by that is the lines beginning with "the flames at away at the thick deadfall..." so perfectly mirror the intense conversation going on. And you have done this a few times in the story which I didn't point out before because it took me a moment to realize how accurately they reflected the scene they were being used in. kudos
| tin-a-holic chapter 9 . 7/9/2014
I'm really enjoying the "when last we met" intro. It's cute and different.
| tin-a-holic chapter 6 . 7/9/2014
oh the angst... it's killing me.. I love it, it's going to be sooo good later I just know it;p
| tin-a-holic chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
Where is this story going? *squeals of delight* You have again ensnared me in your cleverly woven web. But I notice there are some Tin stories left unfinished... perhaps they are just hiding on your computer somewhere *blinking innocently with DG's wide eyes*:)