|Reviews for Devotedly yours|
| StoriUrahara chapter 8 . 12/26/2012
I loved it :)
Daughter of Hat-n-Cloggs
| Krabkrab chapter 5 . 4/10/2012
Ah no... Olivier still outranks him by one. He's a Brigadier General and she's a Major General.
| Starship Artisan chapter 8 . 12/8/2011
Man, that was awesome! I thought it was very in character, actually. And one of the better stories I've read lately, so great work!
| Elisha Norria chapter 2 . 10/20/2011
I really like the story, but the only issue I'm having is your rank structure. 1st Lieutenant Hawkeye couldn't have been promoted to Lieutenant Colonel that fast. She would have had to skip two ranks to make it that far (Captain and Major). Also, Mustang wouldn't refer to her as Lieutenant since she is indeed a Lieutenant Colonel. Instead he would refer to her as Colonel. That darn military past of mine is creeping back in...
| Starry Pink chapter 8 . 12/29/2010
Great job! :)
| JuzSomeone chapter 8 . 12/22/2010
Haha.. I love it a lot :D Thanks for writing it ~ xD
Er, it's not marked completed :O
Great dream and after conversation xD
| JuzSomeone chapter 7 . 12/22/2010
Squeee~ I love the proposal.. It's so sweet ! xD
Tsk tsk Havoc..!
| JuzSomeone chapter 6 . 12/22/2010
Omg .. wonderful.. scenerio I can imagine it happening manga-style xD
Great.. you got me wondering what did he said to Hayate T.T
Poor Havoc xD
| JuzSomeone chapter 5 . 12/22/2010
I dun really mind the ranks. To tell the truth.. I juz skipped them.. since I can't remember what come first.. and dun care xD
Lovely chess playing :D
| JuzSomeone chapter 4 . 12/22/2010
Haha... For you, I'll try harder...
to make my life harder?
LOL, So funny!
Tsk tsk, I love jealous Riza too xD
| JuzSomeone chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
Haha, juz read through the first three chapters.. and gotta say i'm enjoying it :D
I love the way you portray their 'bond' xD
| Akasha Rose chapter 8 . 12/18/2010
Aw, over the top cute. I loved. Great job on this story
| Akasha Rose chapter 7 . 12/18/2010
What an adorable chapter. Loved it
| Akasha Rose chapter 6 . 12/18/2010
Love this chapter
| Akasha Rose chapter 5 . 12/18/2010