Reviews for A Tale of Four Edwards and a Daniel
Annie Lantus chapter 2 . 1/2/2012
Hah this is amazingly hilarious! XD
bryzness chapter 2 . 9/10/2010
Oh wow. I really hope you're gonna continue this. This is epic. All that stiff about "your" Bella and "my" Bella and the look-a-likes and the kinky sex stuff...I can't wait for the next chapter.

I especially liked Flower Child's reaction to Daniel's statement about convincing Bella to fornicate with him. "What in the fuck" indeed.
Handsandfingers chapter 2 . 9/4/2010
Good gawd! That was fun! I wish there was more! Now, I'm off to learn about the other Edwards! Hee!
redsock chapter 2 . 7/7/2010
omg. Just when I think it can't possibly get any funnier, "I had no idea that a woman's mouth could hold so much...zucchini. Pack a few more pounds on her and she would be quite lovely," the Edwards decide to instruct Daniel with a little mac 'n cheese fanfiction! Bwahahahaha ~ I can't wait!

I'm actually thrilled that Daniel's getting some man sex [as opposed to gentleman sex] advice because truth be told, his Bella is ready to launch herself on him like Tracy on Chris from the Into the Wild movie. Not that he should ignore Nan's loving words, but a little confidence might come in handy when the -erm- cumming opportunity handily presents itself! LOL

Annette, am curious to know, are you given a partially written chapter and you take it from there? Because the flow from Edward to Edward [to Daniel of course... Oh! BTW, I was so happy when Dickward made note of the Adonis beneath Daniel's "Ugly Duckling" exterior - my exact observation :)] is very smooth and seamlessly knitted together - a huge part of the story's charm.

Great fun, please carry on!


FenixMJR chapter 2 . 7/7/2010
Loved the story, so funny and so many Edwards, love it, and can’t wait for more
Uk Alice chapter 2 . 7/6/2010
Love it! I can't wait to read all the entries to the competition!
they call me red chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
In theory I like it but I find it really confusing...maybe I'm just too tired to make heads or tails of it.
alaskagirlforever chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
Love it. This was hilarious and introduced me to some new Edwards. Good advice but I hope they don't change our Daniel too much.
JustCarol chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
WONDERFUL! This story is pure genius! I nearly snorted coffee through my nose from laughing. Loving this so much! And Daniel is just so effing adorkable! Fantastic work, ladies.
JustCarol chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is quite possibly the greatest thing I've ever read! Absolutely adored it! Very well done & effing hilarious!
TaBBZZZ chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
lmao i love this!

Our Daniel is getting some pointers from some of the best 'wards' around :D

Rosmarina chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Ha! Sweet Daniel... :)

Is there a fic out there with a sexual use of mac n cheese for real? Ha!
Spencerette chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Wow, they are all wrapped up in the "eye porn"! So funny. A real joy to read :)
Spencerette chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Hilarious! I only know Daniel & Dee, so it looks like I've got some more reading to do :)
cvds chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Great chapter! Have a nice weekend:)
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