|Reviews for The Unanticipated Prey|
| darklightangel64 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Awww! love the moral lesson and the story, of course
| Begin-To-Die chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
| Maravillosa Eres Tu chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
| KT8812 chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
I'm not really a fan of slash, though I have no problems with it either. This is the first slash story that I enjoyed!
Congrats on a job well done!
| Wont2nach chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Interesting story. Nice to see Jasper not struggle as much with not feeding on humans. Thanks for writing.
| cocoalvin chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
That was very enjoyable and an original take on this partnership that we don't see a lot of. Thanks.
| BriyerRose chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Loved this unusual pairing!
| bekins chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I loved this story! I love Jasper/Carlisle, hot! Your writing is great!
| Melbi chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Aww that was great ) Thanks
| deadliestdistractionRN chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
very sexy. Well done
| bouncy 72 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Lol, I'm ridiculous but I feel a bit teary after that. It was beautiful. They actually fit so perfectly together, because Carlisle was such a calm compassionate vampire & this would have been wonderful for Jasper after the yrs of anger, hate & greed he would have felt. I loved how Carlisle wasn't wishy washy, but passionate & comanding.
Thank you for this piece. I loved it. Good luck in the contest!
| tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
This was so good! You can't go wrong with boy/boy lovin'. *happy sigh*
I like that they're normal, with faults. Especially Carlisle. He's always so trusting, loyal, understanding, forgiving, etc, etc. So I enjoyed seeing him portrayed as thinking that he's superior. I can jusy imagine the arguments that developed between J & C due to Carlisle's sanctimonious attitude *snickers*
The only thing I would have something negative to say about is the usage of the word "anyways." Anyways is not a word and has only recently become a part of people's vocabularies, so 1800's Jasper would never have said it.
There's no "s" at the end of the word.
No disrespect intended, that's just something I see a lot in fanfiction and since I'm all PMS-y and hormonal, I just had to take a minute to point it out.
| maniacalmuse chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Sigh. Review, take two.
Ok... HI JOSIE! :)
First off I just want to say that ILY and I am so proud of you for posting this story! I know you were nervous since it's your first slash, but honey, you had absolutely nothing to worry about!
I really enjoyed how you captured Jasper and Carlisle's canon personalities and attributes, and also how you incorporated Jasper's canon backstory into your own. That was very well done!
Their immediate mutual attraction and Jasper's fascination with not only Carlisle's way of life, but also Carlisle himself, was quite taking. The slow build up of their attraction and then the explosion of lust after their first time feeding together was downright hot.
I have to admit that I was rather unsettled about Jasper using his abilities to influence Carlisle to go further sexually with him, but his remorse and confession about it to Carlisle did help reconcile it for me. Carlisle's immediate acceptance and forgiveness of what Jasper had done was so very canon Carlisle. Again, great job capturing their canon personalities!
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you do well in the contest!
Let's chat and WC soon, mmkay?
Love, Me :)
| Vani88 chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Wow... I absolutely love your story... This is as of now my favourite Jasper/Carlisle one. You got both of them down perfectly, with their strenghts and flaws... The lemon was very enjoyable too.