|Reviews for Apology|
| An Author's Pen chapter 1 . 1/6
Very well written. I like the contrast he initially draws between Archer and the other 'thugs' in prison, thinking that Archer is out of place. But in the flashback, Archer's pristine demeanor becomes all the more menacing for the contrast. There's the suggestion of something supernatural in the way you describe the rockets - Archer who looks like an angel, revealed as something more demonic. It's very interesting to see religion from our world put into the context of pokemon and you treat Team Rocket with more depth than most fandom writers do.
Archer's atonement doesn't feel altogether believable to me, but the emotional power of the fic is strong enough to carry it to the end.
| public enemy no. 5 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
i don't read these types of fics often but this is very well-done. the christian themes aren't too overpowering, and it's nice to see team rocket written in a darker light. archer's redemption was especially interesting.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Wow, this is immensely powerful!
| Imperator Justinian chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
An excellent story containing a wonderful lesson on basic theology.
| goawayI'mdeadhahaha chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Archer... repenting... A marvelous idea! Kudos to you! I'm sorry to say that this didn't bring tears to my eyes, though...
| Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Original, thoughtful, and very well done all around. :D
| Queen of Houndooms chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Velo: I believe she's been knocked speechless. That's a first...
| Windy Rain chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Whoa, I never actually read a fanfic like this before, anything like a prisoner's confess. I think it was really okay, though. I liked the way you described the feelings of fear and remorse throughout the story. It was quite touching :)
| I'mSlowlyGoingInsane chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Oh this was so beautifully written. I love it, I found myself crying at the flashback part.
Keep up the good work.