|Reviews for First Time|
| twilite1991 chapter 1 . 4/17
Oh so perfect, as I watch the show this will be playing in my head. Well done. :) :)
| d-kronk chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
I really enjoyed your take on this. I like the idea of them knowing each other for a little bit before the nicknames start. And love Penelope's come back to the 'baby girl' name.
| 26Pearls chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
That was so great, and I just loved the last line!
| Angels-heart1 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Great story, loved it :)
| Catateme chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Yep, they totally challenge/inspire each other ;-)
| GG7HEverwoodHSMfan chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
interesting. i liked it! :)
| lovezjacobblack chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
that is just to cute you did a really good job on it.
| onetreefan chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
awww too cute
| KricketWilliams chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Aww, so cute. That would definitely work. :) Nicely done!
| celticstarwolf chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
oh sugar that was fabulous would've loved to have seen that happen and her leaving Morgan speechless a rarity at that was priceless. loved it hon thanks for sharing
| Kathy0518 chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
That was really good. I dig that you kept it the same but made it your own. Derek and Pen have something going on in there own little world that is just them. Whether there are friends or more and you know I always vote for more :)
Loved the story:)
| b-mystique chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
too cute for words. :)
| morgo7kc chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
hilarious! I was at the library when I read, and it took everything i had to stifle the laughter. great one shot!
| ILoveDerekMorgan chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I liked this version better.
| LoveforPenandDerek chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I really liked it! It had more emotion than the meeting they showed on CM