Reviews for Bright
MegaStriks chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
This is really, really good. I like it and I'll definitaly add it to my faves!
Floating I M A G E R Y chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
So why is she a "ho" ? O:

There are some parts that seem empty to me, but it's getting there. It's still pulling me in to read more, just like the first chapter.

Keep going. :3
SynesterAngel chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
The imagery of the belly dancing was fresh and unexpected. She needs to describe the dog Skyler in more detail. You could feel the self doubt as she looked her-self over in the miror. Once she adds some finishing details, it shows promise. Keep working.