Reviews for Always
Gamma Cavy chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
it would be interesting if you did expand it.
scythe657 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
When Zack reaches Midgar, all hell will break loose! HELL YEAH! GO ZACKY! GO DESTROY THAT FUCKING SHIN-RA! THEY TOOK CLOUD AWAY! :( I WOULD MURDER THEM ALL AND I WILL NEVER -EVER- HAVE MERCY ON THEM :) *KIRA LAUGH* Good story, I kept on crying...
And so the Rose Fell chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
you should continue on i think!
Cased In Darkness chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I like reading fics where Cloud died instead of Zack (because after reading so many stories about Zack's death they start getting repetitive). Anyways, I enjoyed reading this and I hope for a sequel.
zabani-chan chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Oh, please do continue this story! This is the first story I've come across where Zack live and Cloud dies on the cliff. It should be really interesting to see what happens if it had been the other way around.
FreyFrey chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
This story has so much potential!

Don't leave it at just 1 chapter :c
Rairyu chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
This was good. Really good.

And sooooo sad.

You should continue this!
Arra chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
... D: No happy ending for the star-crossed lovers. Yeah, you should continue. FF7 with Zack instead of Cloud. It'd take away some of the mental unstability, but sounds interesting.
Caphawks chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
This was really great! I love the concept of Cloud dying while Zack lives & goes to get revenge on Shinra for taking away his beloved...& the kiss as Cloud was fading almost killed me. Lost control & broke into hysterical sobs. Please expand it! I would greatly appreciate it if you did so!

Unfortunately for me, I had just finished re-watching Zack's death scene on YouTube before I started reading this. I was already crying, but this made me start full-out sobbing uncontrollably. Even worse yet, having the song "The Price of Freedom" playing in the background as I read it...T_T...I really need to learn to stop doing this to myself...
Fuurou chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
I loved this story. I read one kind of like it, but it was multi-chaptered, Zack/Tifa centered, and Cloud didn't do anything cool before he died. Although he wasn't as bad off as Zack, he was still pretty bad off, and that only makes his actions that much more amazing. I cried a little at the ending, which went very well with the song "Sky-Blue Eyes." Were you listening to that while writing this? It's so beautiful.
sunset in love chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
yeah, that was sad... sometimes i thought the same, what if zack survived and cloud don't, whoah, shinra are sure gonna shit himself and hojo is going to start praying a lot! i don't really favor tifa and cloud either, she's too pushy for him, better aerith, but then again, the perfect pairing would be zack and cloud, only them both understand each other 'ghost' so deep, hell, i you ever gonna expand the plot, can you somehow make cloud come back... just a wishful thinking on my part, the world had enough of heartbreaks, and not enough salvation...
Iku-chan chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
God.I shouldn't read stories like this,they seriously kill me inside...

but this was wonderfully written,you did so amazing..:''D

now I can't stop crying.
sylvaniae chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Wow, this was really good :) I really loved it... It made me cry.
MeykoLove chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
seriously, i thinkthe concept of having clouddead, once zack's lover, and zack taking cloud's place in life is at the moment, and original idea. true, many ave speculated how zack would feel, sometimes skipping ahead to the after events to describes zacks emtions, but none have ever truly written the story. the tale of zack avenging cloud, which i believe would be an enthralling concept. i've read many fics on cloud's life after zack died, an tenacity stars zack and cloud both surviving. but for me, that's not enough. i long for a clack tragedy with zack as cloud, with some way to include clack. maybe flashbacks or have cloud visit through dreams, i dunno. its something i personally am interested in writing, but im not that adept. quite simply, it would be a mockery of the tale, so im refraining at the moment. this one-shot has a tone of potential a a long term story-it doesnt even have to necessarily followtheffvii storyline if you ant, considering you've laready changed the hero. but i want to see something like this written long-term(excuse my pushy attitude), and can clearly see you'd make a fantastic author if you continued. so i whole-heartedly encourage you. ill be adding this to my favourites, as a fabulous one-shot, and subscribing to you personally to hope for a continuation. no hard-feelings if you dont. so congrats, 11/10!
Light Envy chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
go for it! make it longer! i will soo read it