Reviews for The Art Of Diaries chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Very nice. I love how the story isn't centered around the original characters, but rather someone we haven't met. I have some constructive criticism to give though. Renesme's voice in this story is a bit too childish. Remember in BD she was really mature, so you might want to work on that. Again, very nice and interesting. I'll be waiting for your next update :-)