Reviews for Last Confession OneShot
alh1971 chapter 1 . 3/11
Heartbreaking...well done.
Robin.D chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
that was good :):):):)
Raven's twimom chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Wow just wow. There are no words. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
kerentrev chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I love it! Its soo painfully beautiful! Its so different.. Great job!
sfiddy chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Oh my god, that was beautiful and sad. Not everyone gets a happy ending, but here no one really did. It was very realistic, though. We all make compromises, she found a set of them that got her through life...

And death.

Lovely. Thanks.
Terp33 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
That was great! I wont be able to stop thinking about this story for a week!
keyecullen chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
That was one of the most moving stories that I have ever read! Ever! So incredibly sad for all involved.

It brings to light the one thought that I have about Jacob and Bella being together. I never understood why people would want that. I mean, Jacob never imprinted on Bella. You story explains just how horrifying it would be for them to be together. Building a life and having children just for him to imprint on someone else and destroy what they built together. And this is why Jacob is no good for Bella in my opinion.

Your story was beautifully written and I really enjoyed it.

mirandakane89 chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Such a sad story...but I am glad Jacob let Edward take Bella from her life.
Jenny True chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I was not expecting that end, and I just cried like a baby...
lilsealsfriend chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
JeeZ, that was so sad! I hate imprinting!
TLCullen132 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010

I think you did a great job of covering the what ifs in your o/s. You definitely pulled off staying in canon character in it which the piece definitely needed to be. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us readers.


Lori94 chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
There are NO words...
jul5857 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
You warned me that there might be tears but I didn't believe you and now I'm sniffling and wiping my eyes like a fool!

That was fantastic and so beautifully written. Just amazing.

Please write something again soon!

Thanks for the tears...

NUNICHAN chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
This is so sad and beautiful! It had me crying in no time. As I read the tears just started, it was a bittersweet sort of sadness. I really liked this piece, the emotions you portray across Bella and her thoughts are just heartbreaking. I must say that I would not really be able to choose, knowing two great loves and losing or maybe NOT knowing. How does one choose something like this?

Beautiful work as always. I love your writting, continue using your talent to entertain us,to make us cry and laugh.
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