Reviews for Vignettes
Sophprosyne chapter 20 . 3/26/2016
Man, what a ride. I felt intensely connected to the characters throughout the story. They all had their distinctive personalities. You breathed life into a story I've experienced so many times. This is easily my favorite KOTOR story. Thank you for writing this. I laughed and was saddened and was happy and now I just feel a little empty.
Jack chapter 20 . 6/17/2014
This was wonderful. I'm not sure there are any stories that have really captured the relationship that the crew of the Ebon Hawk, especially Bastila and Revan, had with each other. Jolee was great too. Thank you for sharing this with us.
birthofthecool chapter 9 . 5/10/2011
I'm sorry. I really do love this story, but Juhani is way ooc and her spech pattern?

Sounds a lot more like Yoda than the real Juhani.
birthofthecool chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
Still loving it.

Your HK crack's me up, when I play the game he just annoys the crap out of me.

Why does Juhani THINK in stumbled and wrong grammar.

Since she is certainly thinking in her own language, it shpuld be normal.
birthofthecool chapter 4 . 5/7/2011
Enjoying this quite a bit so far.

Minor complaint would be that your Revan is too goofy and Bastila is both more stiff AND more easily fooled or rattled thatn in the actual game.

Plus, why would Juhani be perplexed for five hours about Carth and Revan waggering the Ebon Hawk?

Last but not least; why does your Revan have no name? Or is it "The Jedi with no name?" You know, Eastwood style.

Anyways, these are really just miniscule complaints, otherwise your story is fun to read.
tsujigiri chapter 17 . 12/4/2010
"Translation: I believe the Cathar meatbag just insulted the lineage of Darth Malak, Master. She referred to the mating preference of his mothe-"

Inspired. This chapter, just... really good. If you have aspirations as a professional writer, consider this an endorsement.
ihavetohaveaname chapter 19 . 8/18/2010
Wow Great story...really fantastic I'm so glad I stumbled on it truly fantastic writing
untitledmind chapter 19 . 8/17/2010
Reading this story for the second time had definitely been a good choice, considering how undeniably good it is :)
lotbe chapter 19 . 8/17/2010
Yay! Perfect chapter, as always! Nothing much to say though... Love the adorable humor, and how Bastila came back to Revan. Your fall of Bastila is totally interesting and just awesome, it's kinda different, and I just gotta love that!
Infernal00 chapter 9 . 7/28/2010
A great new KOTOR story, im really loving every chapter.

Was not so sure where you were going with Mission's spy equipment but it turned out well in the end. )

So thats about it, though I would like to see see more of T3-M4
lotbe chapter 16 . 7/26/2010
Alek the sidekick! Yay! Haha, love the chapter, by the way! Awesome work, as always. Love your idea of Uthar's datapad wallpaper... so funny!
Derelict Vessel chapter 16 . 7/26/2010
Lol, I love this story, I really do. Always funny...but this one..."I've never seen so much *porn*!" LOL! Gold star for that, my friend :).
Blatant0 chapter 15 . 7/21/2010
This is a brilliant story. I love the characterisations and how you have fleshed out the events of the game. Your writing is really good and I like the humour. Thanks for writing.
lotbe chapter 15 . 7/20/2010
AHAHAHAHA! Teenage father, of course! That's so funny! Anyway, still loving the story so far. Update soon!
untitledmind chapter 15 . 7/20/2010
XD. You just gotta love Juhani and her curiosity about the human culture..
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