Reviews for Sharp Edges
WishingDreamer5 chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Wow, it sure was short, but in this case it was so...strong! I really love the way you describe the situation in just a few words!

Just one mistake I could find:

"...and ferventl wished.."

You forgot the "y" after "ferventl" but I bet you already found that out.

And I loved how you ended it. The last sentence made the whole story special in a way I can't describe.
The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
Oh wow, a few typos but this is extraordinary. I love it.