Reviews for The Doomed Closet of Darkness
Leesa Perrie chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
LOL!
Bonkers4Reid chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Hilarious, but the lines were really out of character.
ellesbelles2009 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
haha! just the image of neal trying to break down a door was awesome :)
tinyinara chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Hehe this is awesome :D
Scarlett Rogue chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Priceless! You nailed their banter! Wonderful work :D
ferryboat George chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
cute
True Love Lives Forever chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Hilarious! I laughed so hard that I started crying.
GhirardelliFan chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Great story. I like the unique introduction, and how it smoothly transitions into Neal getting the same treatment he gave Peter!
Lilynette chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Hehe, that was very funny :) The dialogue was spot on. Good job, and thanks for the read!
ocida chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
haha, loooveeee ittt~
NDKidsMom chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
THAT was fun!
peppe1951 chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
That was cute...the conversation sounded just like something they would do...you really nailed them...now please write another one soon.
taliya162 chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
bahaha! oh i loved it!
Ursula4x chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
That was adorable.
Tanigi chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Hee hee hee! I really liked that. Especially the whole maintenance closet part. And how Neal went to get a slushy. And I LOVED that it was locked from the inside... this was just a really good story. :)
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