Reviews for Amoretta
Mikado X Goddess chapter 20 . 5/30/2013
Lollypops101 chapter 20 . 4/6/2013
I loved this story!
Pokemonchen chapter 20 . 1/8/2012

I hope you will update your own stories soon!
TheAmaryllisBlossom chapter 7 . 9/12/2011
I love your story so far! I've been looking and looking for something good to read - especially fairytales. I'm so glad I found your story; I hope you right more after this one!

echo167 chapter 8 . 9/7/2011
Wonderful story so far! It's 2 in the morning on a school night... I think i'm going to stay up and read the rest of the story! Anyways, this story is on it's way into my "favorites" section :)
Ardelis Mercy chapter 5 . 8/9/2011
Nice chapter. It was good to have the two of them interacting more together. The length of the chapters really work with the scenes too. They don't seemed too rushed. It's a good story so far. :)
Ardelis Mercy chapter 4 . 8/9/2011
This was an entertaining chapter. The only thing that was slightly distracting was the short and quick changes of point of views. It was a good chapter though! :) I enjoyed it and I'm interested to see where the story goes from here.
Ardelis Mercy chapter 3 . 8/9/2011
This was a pretty good chapter, but I didn’t care for the reasons the prince had for not liking the princesses. He didn’t like Saphronia because she was a year older than him and too old? And Permelia was too young at 18? I get way he wouldn't like Celesta but when he sees Amorette, she’s perfect for him? It didn’t seem realistic that he considered the others not good enough based off of those initial observations. I’m not trying to be unkind or rude. Please don't get me wrong, I like this story. I understand that he is supposed to be more attracted to Amorette but... the reasons given for dismissing the others just didn’t seem realistic. But I liked the end of the chapter when Amorette seems determined not to marry him. That part was interesting. I liked the ending line. :)
Ardelis Mercy chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
I like the idea behind this story. It’s interesting and personally, I like the length of the chapters; not too long or short. Keeps the reader interested. :) P.S. I also use the meaning of names to describe part of the personality of my characters. I’ve always been interested in things like that. :)
Ardelis Mercy chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
I like this story and it has only just started! :) Great beginning. I love the details and the intro to the characters. It helps get a clear picture of them in my mind. This story has promise and I'm excited to see where it goes!
JJandHotch4ever96 chapter 20 . 8/2/2011
loved the epilogue! cant wait till the sequel! loved the entire story!
xXJustSomeRandomKidXx chapter 20 . 8/2/2011
Awww. Fluffiness! Can't wait for you to post your sequel :]
Account Moved. Xx chapter 20 . 8/2/2011
Aww that was a sweet and beautiful ending :)

I can't wait for the sequel xxx
sparkling unicorn chapter 20 . 8/2/2011
Awww cute story:) Can't wait for the sequel



Jenn222 chapter 20 . 8/2/2011
Awwww. Cute ending :)
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