|Reviews for Luciano Grimaldi|
| Steelegirl chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Please put up another chapter!(:
| BlueEyes444 chapter 5 . 9/4/2010
_wipes tears away_ This was the best chapter yet! I loved how your wrote Reid when he learned about Luc's "death" and when Luc showed up and oh my gosh! This was just too awesome for words. I loved it! Though I'm dreading Lily and Luc meeting up again. And I bet Reid will feel pretty...you know...because Katie is his roommate, and she was a Snyder and just...wow. I think T-R-O-U-B-L-E is coming. O.O
Oh, and I think it would really excting if Reid was kidnapped in order to get to Luc. -looks sly- Not that I love whump to my favorite boy or anything. ;D
Great job of course on the chapter and please, please update soon,
| BlueEyes444 chapter 4 . 9/4/2010
OH MY GOSH! This is...W.O.W. I think that's all I can say to even come close to giving this chapter justice.
| BlueEyes444 chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
-faints- I adore this.:D
By the way, loved the Twilight referance earlier on. :)
| BlueEyes444 chapter 2 . 9/4/2010
Oh, brilliant! :D
| BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Oh, yeah, I'm addicted. And proud of it! Fantastic and I can't wait to read more! :D
| LuRendgame chapter 5 . 8/2/2010
I want more ;-;
| ilyanietzsche chapter 5 . 7/28/2010
i can imagine luke speaking italian to reid by his bedside,sono qui...so sweet the scene is,i wanna read more!
| bowsie22 chapter 5 . 7/20/2010
Wow. The next chapter should be explosive. Can't wait for more :D
| Nataku-sensei chapter 5 . 7/19/2010
O.M.G. now THIS is what ATWT should of been! i love the storyline you made! what happens next! Reid is just to damn adorable! and YES DISS LILY ! keep on writing a great story! cheers!
| bb1019 chapter 5 . 7/19/2010
I like your story a lot, I like this alternate world of Luciano Grimaldi, it's fun and entertaining but I'm not sure how I feel about how fluffy Luc and Reid are. I would've pictured Luciano to be more hard edged and tough. I see him as someone who isn't very lovey dovey or touchy feely with anyone, I'm sure he has a passionate side but he I don't see him using words like "sweetheart".Maybe he'd say "babe" but only after a given amount of time. I feel Reid would have to work a lot harder to get Luc to open up about his life. Luc is from a powerful family and he's has death threats and bombs going off around him...he's not a fuzzy guy. I imagine it would only be when he's alone with Reid that he's the teddy bear you've protrayed him as.
Please don't think I'm insulting your work...far from it, I actually really enjoy your creativity. Maybe in the next chapters you can create a more hard shell version of Luc...or maybe not. It's your fan fic do with it what you like. but please keep writing, I'm really enjoying this a lot. Good luck.
| Nataku-sensei chapter 4 . 7/13/2010
what NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! are you going to write more? please write more! waaaaaaa please! this is like a soap opera in its self! love it and LOVE the part where you places CHOLLI! my fav german soap! but ya what is going to happen? did he really die? is tonio gonna be saved? will reid and Luciano be together? please tell meeeeeeeeee! ,
| Milord Mori chapter 4 . 7/12/2010
I love the cliff hanger! I was like NOOOO! darn those planes. Keep writing it is awesome!
| skylighterII chapter 4 . 7/12/2010
Nervous? ME? No not at all. What's on my forehead? That's just water, not sweat. But seriously, Luc is not gonna die right? RIGHT?
| zippythegreat chapter 4 . 7/10/2010
oh my i love this so much...poor Reid...