|Reviews for Affliction|
| Zippy Saboteur chapter 6 . 2/22
Shouldn't the map hermione was using have shown karkaroff ?
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/2
Ohmychessingmcnuggets! This fic is so awesome! Fleurmione fics can get predictable after a certain amount of time but this one. You made it exciting, unpredictable, and just pure gold! I love your interpretation of the veela thrall and bonding process. This is a rare gem! Thank you! Thank you so much for writing this!
| SkinnyLatte chapter 21 . 2/1
Wow what a great story! I loved the tension you built up between them the chemistry was electric!
Hermione was a little frustrating but I think that you completely captured that confusing teenager time perfectly.
Simply perfect :)
| Ariarebele chapter 21 . 1/28
Hello, I am writing to congratulate you, this story was really amazing, I loved the plot, your writing style... Simply everything. It is a shame that you haven't got the time to post the smutty sequel that you mentioned in the AN at the last chapter. I know it's been a while since you posted this story and have given this pairing a shot, but you should really consider to write them again, you're great at it ;)
| cel pintat de vermell chapter 6 . 1/4
Ah... Here I imagined Karkaroff as a pissed girl who hears a conversation in a bathroom and decides to plot against the popular girl because she is not so popular and again, she is pissed. Hmmm. Quite a sight.
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/30/2013
Author you said not to be too hard on Hermione, but she's being an asshole. Other then that great story.
| HarryLover chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
Wow, what hot way to start off the story. Can't wait to finish.
| Sleek Ink chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Enthralling! Your writing has its own thrall. I'm happily addicted to this fic. Love the constant, albeit frustrating, tension you creatively captured between these two. Hope to see more Fleurmione in your roster.
| sgtranglin chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
So wow what a story this is amazing and extremely good, and i like your take on the Veela and stuff which is extremely good as well i would love to see a follow up/sequel to this story i think it could be just as amazing if not more so, but anyway this is a great story.
| Artemis Noir chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I was kind of enjoying the start, and then I realized that Hermione is 15 years old...you write very well, but erm...
| Dom chapter 21 . 11/4/2013
This story is F*cking amazing... enough said
| Agron-Riveraa chapter 21 . 10/4/2013
Oh my Fleurmione heart! Tbh I don even know how I got through that fic because there were so many grammar and spelling mistakes and most of the time I would just leave the fic but I was enjoying your plot line a lot as I've only ever read one other fic set during Hermione's fourth year which is crazy. I really loved the direction you went with in this fic especially with the portrayal of Fleurs character! I've never really read her as animalistic before and this was amazing I swear I felt for Hermione, my brain would also turn to mush around that! I'll be sure to check out some of your other fics if they peak my interest and hopefully your spelling and grammar get better ;) jsyk you spelt 'blonde' as 'blond' for half the fic lol! Anyways thank you for that!
| ghostlylove chapter 21 . 7/14/2013
Beautiful. Amazingly beautiful and pure. This is one of the best femslash stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading and now I feel as though I should go read any other stories you have to offer. Positively wonderful. Great work, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
| Lunaris-wind chapter 21 . 6/28/2013
I enjoyed it, almost as much as your Bellice works, but it has two problems that stop me from saying it's a great fic. The first is the resolution to the fight that ends with a bludger. Instead of feeling like something was resolved, it just sort of ended. The second is that Fleur's character felt a lot like the Alice I've seen you write at times, though it could be the other way around. I can't complain much, since your Fleur was a good character, but I couldn't help but draw comparisons.
As I said, I enjoyed reading, which is the case with most of your work. So, thank you for writing it.
| May996 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013