|Reviews for Altered States of Consciousness|
| Ris Fallon chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Yes... an optimistic Knox. Must be the very beginning of the war. ;]
Another amazing one. I'm just going to spam your inbox with reviews. .
| seroun chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Finally got around to fully reading this! I have to say, you've written Kimblee beautifully. He's so sadistic and sick... made me feel just as queasy as Riza.
Loved it! One of my favorites from you! :D
| SidekickKep chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
This made me mad at Kimblee. But half the time he does make mad, so that just means good writing on your part. So yeah, congrats on making Kimblee a douche! :D But, still, he's a fun douche. If that makes sense, lol.
Anyways, brilliant writing as always. I felt so bad for Riza here (lately it seems I've been pitying Riza, hmmm) and even though I don't get the whole house thing (which I'm assuming is coming in 93), it's just kind of sad- Ishval and all that pressure Kimblee puts on her.
But Roy comes to the rescue, and we all love that. By the way, you portrayed Knox fine- I don't think he's too optimistic. He's stubborn, is all.
| Starry Pink chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Very nicely done. Kimblee is very creepy and in-character.