|Reviews for An Adventure Beyond Time|
| OriksGaming chapter 1 . 9/14
Wow, so cheesy. And the writing is fairly amateurish. I suppose it's understandable considering that this was your first story, but still, it seems as if you didn't edit it at all. Most of the sentences are poorly worded and the meeting with Kronos is fairly contrived.
| Guest chapter 53 . 2/15
| ThePercyJacksonOracle chapter 10 . 7/11/2014
Why no Percabeth? *Sad Face*
| gamelover41592 chapter 53 . 7/1/2014
| TheTwinStorytellers chapter 6 . 1/18/2014
*Tilts head in confusion* But Percabeth? Eh I hate it anyway and I also hate Annabeth
| minoturus chapter 17 . 12/16/2013
epic story line
| Talons of Ice chapter 53 . 9/11/2013
I Don't know Who I have to pick D:
Rachel or Zoé? Zoe or Rachel?
| Talons of Ice chapter 15 . 9/11/2013
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/8/2013
I first stumbled onto your fan fic whilst looking for a different story. After two paragraphs I was hooked! The only problem was now I had to find a way to start from the beginning.
I've learned how to book mark things, and even discovered how to get to the beginning (I actually started in your 4th book, and begged my husband to teach me how to navigate through websites!).
The story so far is great, a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, but having started in book four, I know that you get so much better. I'm a stickler for those things, but your story is so engaging. I MUST READ MORE!
Thankyou for the time you've put into this.
Sincerely, Misty Hamby
| Kayla Daughter of Thanatos chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
I think Percy is a bit OOC, he sounds more formal and smarter than usual. If you ever think of going in and revising the book then that would be something to revise I guess. Don't mean to seem rude.
| vickydd chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
good idea but back then they got maried at 13, it's more believable if you said fiance
| angellyx13 chapter 53 . 6/10/2013
I always reread this story because it's amazingly good. I love the Rachel in this story with Percy.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
YO BEST FANFICTIONN I EVER READ, I READ SO MANY TIME TRAVELS. AND THEY ALL WAS BORING :( :) BUT WHEN I CAME ACROSS THIS ONE IT WAS SO NICE. I LOVED HOW IT TOOK PLACE IN THE TROJAN WAE AND THE BOND WITH ACHILLES, AND MAGIC I DEFINETLY LIKED THAT :) BTW Do You know WHat your next title is gonna be, I want percy too see zoe again, And also how much things Changed in the future
| Warpwind chapter 6 . 5/7/2013
you do realize that ancient Greeks didn't have girlfriends right?
| WPLord chapter 53 . 3/21/2013
Oh, so the gift is a bracelet for the person he will marry. Wasn't expecting that. Anyway, Part 2 here we go.