|Reviews for Random Intermission 5: A Tiny Great Escape|
| Dreamerdragon chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
bravo. i loved the story please continue.
| Latihanmenulis chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
I re-read it again and it's still so sweet! Awwww...
| kuroneko051 chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I love this story so much
is there any continuation?
By the way, I want to write some story about dave x irina, could you help me give some rating and suggestion?
lot of thanks
sorry my english isn't that good
| slifer1012 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
i love this story and i love you, i wish i could read more 5 stars
| Aerynth chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I have to say I found that really cute! Regardless of the fact that I don't ship Dave/Irina (which of course you know), this snippet made me smile more than a few times.
My only input for change is a small one; watch out for using commas when its not necessary. I know english isn't your first language and you write well regardless of that fact, so I wouldn't worry about it TOO much. Its not something that keeps the story from getting across to the reader. You've improved on it a lot throughout your last few stories!
Thank you for the story and hope to see more soon!