Reviews for Fire Emblem: Second Chances
Sadaharu Chomper chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Okay, for a tactician fic, it's definitely a good start, but there are a couple of awkwardly written bits and it's really kinda annoying how Lyn constantly refers to Rei as 'Rei Kira'. If she was doing that because, at the beginning, she thought her name was 'Reikira', then you should've consistantly had it spelt like that.
Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Hey Murasaki! I haven't seen you around in the FE section before so I thought I'd give you a review. This seems fairly well-written, but so far it doesn't seem to have a lot to do with Fire Emblem...will FE elements be showing up later on? Ah, well, don't pay me too much heed. Thanks for dropping by :)