Reviews for Falling
1sunfun chapter 3 . 1/8/2013
Lexand chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I love your work. It is just amazing... I bow down to you great writer. :P
spiel chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
I keep expecting Zack to pop in and threaten Sephiroth to treat Cloud right xD
VanilleSerah chapter 3 . 2/26/2012
To be honest, I love your books, Sephiroth/Cloud but however, this chapter seemed a little bit out of place. I mean you adding information about Sephiroth's mother is fine, but I was a bit disappointed, because you didn't really explain how she was, you just said that she looked like Sephiroth and that was about it. I actually thought that Sephiroth would be a bit more unwilling to share his past with Cloud, as you've mentioned in the previous chapter, but also because, in the game of Final Fantasy, Sephiroth was introduced as a very cold and sarcastic character. I was a bit irked, when you mentioned Sephiroth's mother, because I was fine reading the story, until you mentioned her. It kind of ruined the flow. I request you to edit your work thoroughly and ask someone to read to the story, if they can be completely absorbed in the story, and if the detail required about Sephiroth's mother was enough. I'm not trying to pick a fight with you and I hope you can make use of my review. -Serah
history chapter 3 . 11/6/2011
I like it!
ScaredyCatDan chapter 3 . 6/9/2011
Sephiroth is sexy. Like, seriously drop dead sexy.

...Why do I always like the bad guys?

And I love Cloud, he's adorable _
Emriel chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
beautiful. and add jenova to the mix *O*...
KirasTastefulTragedy chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
that was the hottest and sweetest combo of a chapter.. aww.. but dang. the nibelhiem mission. drat on that we all know what happened. but deary me. Cat-like cloud and cat-eyed sephy! yaysome!
MakoHeadrush chapter 3 . 1/12/2011
I know I read this quite some time ago, but I can't believe I've never left a review! I love this story so much; it started off HOT with that shower scene, then turns all tender as Cloud and Seph fall for each other.

Sephiroth asking Cloud to ride him...that was sooooo hot. whew! I'm fanning myself, in the middle of a winter storm here! :)
Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 3 . 1/12/2011
That chapter was so sweet and cute! But why is Cloud so nervous going to Nibelhiem? Great chapter! Can't wait for the next!XD
kickcows chapter 3 . 1/11/2011
Why do I have a bad feeling about this visit to Nibelheim? T_T

Nice job on this chapter. Cloud is so super cute in this story, his enthusiasm makes me giggle. :)
Dragi chapter 3 . 1/11/2011
cheers an story to read when i get up :) wonder what will happen next :)) liked the chapter
Head Shotted chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Hi there :)

I really like this chapter because its just hilarious, especially the opening line. I think your really good at writing, in general.

Keep up the great work!
chouhimes chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
Aw, this is such a cute fic. I can has moar hot shower sex plz? :D

Thanks for writing; I can't wait for the next chapter! -

Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
Awwww what a sweet chapter. Sephiroth aknowledged clouds innocence and was so nice about it. Now it seems that sephiroth is falling in love! Can't wait to see how this turns out. Great chapter! Update soon please! :-D
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