|Reviews for The Divine Glitch|
| jae.griffieth chapter 1 . 2/18
that... was fuckin EPIC! you blew my mind
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/5
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
| ram 0f th3 f0r3st chapter 5 . 1/25
I loved it so much! It was so unique and sweet! I want a guardian angel of death! Hahaha thank you for that fic!
| Gingershavesouls chapter 5 . 1/11
That was awesome.
I loved the platypus part too:)
| lulu422 chapter 5 . 12/31/2013
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! That was falkin awesome! Do continue being awesome.
| qn4eto1234 chapter 5 . 12/29/2013
That was beautiful. I found this story on the best of times, because I really needed something to cheer me up. So, thank you.
I liked the ending, though I was kinda hoping you would let Sasuke and Kiba meet. I'm sure it would have been interesting. Oh well...
I'm definitely gonna read some of your other works.
| Ayame Gawaine chapter 5 . 11/22/2013
Fantastic, breathtaking(HOHOHO), inspiring, fabulous...
Really! I can't even decide, find or discover the best word to describe this story!
Have you ever wonder of what a piece of Heaven you just wrote here? I mean, I caught myself depressing, loving, cheering, hoping, getting really sad and almost screaming "SO UNFAIR!" while reading this and... Gosh darn it! *Laughts scandalously*
I'm truly regretting keeping this reading for later and later and later and then, when I finally could read... It felt almost pleasant as Sasuke's end of waiting! (...Okay, he's happiness is tremendously bigger than mine, sorry xD)
Do you know how BREATHTAKING (there is really no other word xD) was Naruto and Sasuke's scenes? Of course you know, you made then as to match their feelings, don't you? Even if not, it clearly is this way. Scenes, lines and sensations I felt crawling through my skin while reading...
Kid Naruto's tries to reach Sasuke... Always trying, no matter how 'near the death' he was... Always the two of them struggling to just TOUCH each other... Was just so wonderful...
I just loved all the "He took my breath away" Naruto said to Kiba, just as much as Kiba's inner bitch(I adored it LOL)! And after... "I want you" OH! Nothing more to say.
The romantic way you put Adam and Eva's part... Man, how lovely it turned to! This soulmate thing is really complicated, but really, really lovely...
About the plot, I loved your originality! I appreciate it very much. I couldn't stop myself from reading and reading, getting surprise by the time I finished. It's really hard to find such a good writting, so, congratulations!
This is, like, an obrigatory reading for shippers of this ship. Seriously.
Your account appear to be disabled for a long while, but I don't mind if you come to not read my review. But I would be really happy if you did, because you deserve to know how precious this story is.
Till we meet again!
| ansjovisjj chapter 5 . 11/13/2013
oh my god I totally loved this (although you made me check if they didn't both die at the end xD) thank you so much!
| Teppen chapter 5 . 11/11/2013
This just has to be the greatest fanfic I've read. It so purely amazing, I loved it.
| CassBerry chapter 5 . 11/8/2013
I really have no words for this. It's such a gorgeous story. I think it's one of my favourite angel fics that I have read in ages. Everything just flowed together so nicely, the characters were so well written and Kakashi at the end was hilarious. Thank you for writing this! 3
| luvthesea17 chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
holy. just. holy shit.
That was fucking amazing and intense.
And I'm not even a damn Christian. Actually I used to be one of those atheists that defied anything to do with the religion. (not anymore btw)
And now I'm just like. in awe.
The intensity between naruto and sasuke is beautiful. Though the descriptions of their inter course is um. A bit much for me. This is only my 2nd yaoi fan fiction after all.
Really love how Heaven is sort of like an organization. Since i don't really believe in anything, this makes it seem much more professional and easy for me to read.
And LOL kakashi is so perfect in this XD
Thanks for an amazing read ーyou've gotten a freaking /atheist/ to really enjoy this. And I'm a pretty set non-believer.
Hope that you continue writing stories as breath-taking as this ;D
Your annoying fan,
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2013
This was wonderful I love it!
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
story, sweet, funny and at the same
time you feel their sadness as your own
| Reviews to Master chapter 5 . 8/28/2013
And God said, "Let there be light."
Hello. It's me again. Another damn amazing story you've written here. Simple as I'm going to put it, it was absolutely 'breath taking'. No pun intended. *snickers* At first glance I didn't expect ANY of this to happen, nor did I expect it to be heavily based around religion (seeing as how fanfiction does not often write around religion), neither would I have seen coming how it would be set out. But like the other story you so graciously written, it was fantastic. Being a Catholic I understand everything that was touched upon, explained, and carried out, and I couldn't have helped but worry about God's 'infamous' temper. Hell hath no fury on a woman's scorn but God's irate flares rival that of a two-year old's.
Ah, soul mates to the end I suppose. Never one to separate even in the most dire circumstances. Beautiful how it ended really. Of COURSE, Kakashi had to be the humourus one in a deep moment. As the say, 'the show much go on!' :D
I can talk about many things, gush over your ability to make me tremble in anticipation, or fangirl over this story (and die from blood loss over the smut *winks*), but my words can only convey so much. All I have to say is that I thank you for writing another amazing story and I'm happy I found it. Nearly brought me to tears writing this review.
Who knew a glitch in the system would be so perfect?
| zei1827 chapter 5 . 8/26/2013
i'm not a fan of angel fics, but that was..totally amazing. The way that you've woven the concept of God in a naruto context was wicked. I'm a fan! :)