Reviews for The Blackbird
Aidulin41 chapter 1 . 5/2
A well written abstracted story is a tresure. I believe this is one of those. Beautiful. Haunting. Mesmerising. This is one I'll come back to.
Zarohk Korobase chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Good lord, I think you're reading my mind. Excellent crack then my favorite poem connected to my favorite character from Death Note.
Purple Goron chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Much too short and the symbolism was a little cheesy too me. Sorry.
im.watchin.sunsets chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
that was beautiful, i love how you compared Naomi to a raven and Light to a phoenix, and i feel like you sort of got into Light's head, how he used Naomi's thoroughness to bring her to her grave; well written, and it flowed like a piece of poetry :)
Rinhail chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I absolutely love what you did here. I loved the scenes between Raito and Naomi. I always thought of Naomi as the first L. The first real obstacle Raito had to overcome.

Anyway, excellent story line.
Amethyst Shards chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
That was very beautiful and poetic. Excellent work!
Coryx chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Pretty. I like it.

Who cares if it goes AU? Make it an original. That's where half my original story idea come from-AU idea, then I figure "Well, crap, this AU is too weird for canon" and BOOM! Original.

It's fun, having worlds in your head.
DonutMastr chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
i like it, if you continue it the first chapter would be hard to top.