Reviews for All of Him
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
The fight with the Deadly Nadder in the Kill Ring? I think Hiccup always followed Gobber's instructions when possible, and he was out of the way of the Nadder, it was Astrid who stumbled on Hiccup not the other way around. In fact every accident that happened in the arena was the other teens' fault not Hiccup's.
endoplasmic chapter 1 . 1/15
"later, when she got him to herself, she'd show him exactly how it was going to be"

bulleuse chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
You depicted her so well ! Thor bless you
Shojobaby chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
Love it! Great job!

God bless you.
Jtgil chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
I love your A/N: "This initially just started out as a short fluff piece about Astrid's thoughts on Hiccup. Well it grew larger than the Green Death." It made me laugh!
The story was really well done, the writing, everything! I liked how you didn't told the movie again but did a few selected scenes. I'm not happy how the movie didn't do justice to Astrid or the other teens, like expand in their personalities, perspectives and so on. Very well done!
Brooklyn Byrne chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Angryhenry chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
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sakuradancer3 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013


Lol, it was great. Loved it.
Nefertari Queen chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I can't explain. This is wonderful.
TheHard chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
That was delightfull, thanks for sharing :)
Pinnatus chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
I liked that you didn't go scene by scene but rather had one cohesive, flowing introspective story. Something like this might work well in 1st person perspective so you could add a little more of their own mannerisms and speech in their.

Still an excellent story that is definitely favorited.
CupcakeGoodness101 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Awwww 3
JakChan23 chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Awesome Story!

Obviously a great perspective choice seeing as how Astrid has a better view of the things happening around Hiccup who always things going on.

Further into the story I was getting Goosebumpy with the events seeing them through Astrid's eyes and there's a lot of emotion there. Whoo!
ketbelle chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
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