Reviews for Harry Potter and the Next Overlord
Reaper4991 chapter 6 . 9/9/2016
Getting better, though some of it still feels slow
Reaper4991 chapter 5 . 9/9/2016
The blues would need something that can go into water and on land, so maybe giant frogs?
The blacks could temporarily possess an animal to get around faster and they can leave it at will with the animal being corrupted to still help/serve harry
Reaper4991 chapter 4 . 9/9/2016
Might be a good idea to increase the lengths to skip multiple filler chapters
Interesting, Luna somewhat knows about overlord artifacts
Reaper4991 chapter 3 . 9/9/2016
Not bad, but again not much to comment on
Reaper4991 chapter 2 . 9/9/2016
Not much to comment on here, though I hope hermione is with Harry and not Ron in this
Reaper4991 chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
Interesting start, I look forward to more.
Sorry for not giving more, but I haven't got a feel for it yet
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2016
maybe grey minions who don't do much damage but are good tanks
Paxloria chapter 20 . 6/10/2016
Good story so far.
Hope you continue it.
Paxloria chapter 19 . 6/10/2016
So by now ('cause of how the armored figure looked to Umbridge) Gnarl has given Harry those potions and he's grown & bulked up a lot then, right?
Paxloria chapter 18 . 6/10/2016
I hope she had the Locket on her.
Paxloria chapter 17 . 6/10/2016
Its a good chapter...
BUT it wasn't good to leave that note laying around in the Weasly home for just ANYONE to to find. It would have been bad if the Death Eaters or Ministry had found it first and Got his stuff.
Paxloria chapter 2 . 6/9/2016
Well, that explains why they were there!
Paxloria chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
Good chapter!
Kinda wonder why the minions were already there though
Johnny Spectre chapter 20 . 5/24/2016
curious to see how this continues. I'll keep an eye on it.
Princess Asuna chapter 20 . 4/27/2016
An interesting story, one I hope to see more of. :)
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