|Reviews for Waterfall by Night|
| Novadestin chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Yeah I already reviewed this on your LJ but hell you posted it here to so I am going to say it all over again! This story is hilarious and it is definitely one of my favorites! Keep writing cause I want to read more! :D
| Chew-a-Pick chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
I love it-your description of the events, how you open the story, and how you make an "everyday" event seems funny and interesting. The details had me play a movie inside my brain, and the Jashin scene had me shudder. In my opinion, the main strength of this fic would be the point of view-the thoughts and reactions to the events unfolding before "your" eyes are so darn hilarious and in a way, realistic. And I love how you end the fic. ;)
"... if there were eyes on her book, who knew what might be under the bed!"
Monsters, obviously. Sorry, couldn't resist. XD