|Reviews for Cheshire Cat|
| xxPenAndRosesxx chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
Interesting glares... hm...
Overall, your punctuation's improved, along with capitalization. It's getting easier and easier to read. Try to give your characters more depth though, especially Stella since she's the center of it all. Show her personality a bit more.
Anyways, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Good luck.
P.S. I got your message. See you tomorrow!
| xxPenAndRosesxx chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
Cute... I like twin moments...
| xxPenAndRosesxx chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
Tee hee... I like the part where the kids come falling out of the closet.
Punctuation's slightly better. Capitalization needs work too...
| xxPenAndRosesxx chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Not bad... needs a bit of work, though, with the punctuation. Makes it easier to read. Some more information would be good too.
It's an interesting story. I'll be on the lookout for it, Hika-kun!