|Reviews for Sounds like october in two parts|
| randomplotbunny chapter 2 . 8/17/2014
| Alishabear chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Wonderful! I loved it so much!
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
such a masterful tale of love! i am privelaged to have read it.
| highlyfunctioningmikyla chapter 2 . 5/28/2012
This really cute in a kind of porny way...
| Angel-Castiel chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
That story is so amazing
| SuspiciousFlower chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
Oh wow so much lovely 3
| probablyquantum chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I like how confident Sherlock was through this. :)
| Umino Akiko chapter 2 . 7/17/2010
Aw Watson! So cute!
| Insanely Me chapter 2 . 7/12/2010
I love how you wrote Sherlock. Loved the story as well!
| Akkalia chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
Ms. Hudson might find it a bit suspicious to deliver food to an empty room.
One quick mistake: You wrote waisted, it's wasted. The waist you wrote is the one around your middle. lol
| Malicious Sherlock chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
Aw! It's over? Nooooo!
This was all kinds of amazing. I love the way you write Holmes. He's such a delightful asshole, complete with utter narcissism that is undeniably adorable.
An you have also noticed how Robert Downey Jr rolls his r's in the most adorable and gorgeous way?
In general, I demand more!
I look forward to reading more of your stories!
| Malicious Sherlock chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Ah! I loved this, twas delicious!
William, eh? Love it.
God, this was excellent! I can't wait to read more from you!
Oh, and a question. Is the title a reference to "The Futurist" by (praise his name) a Mr. Robert Downey Jr? In particular, the lyric "Sounds like October, a Futurist noise"?If so, good on you, my dear, because that is an excellent song, and if not, still a good title.
| Nathea chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Je viens de voir sur ton profil le drapeau français, j'espère donc que tu arriveras à lire cette review !
J'aime beaucoup ton histoire, je suis pas assez douée en anglais pour voir si tu as fait des fautes :)
Tu indiques dans ton titre "chap 1" donc j'attends maintenant le chapitre 2 en espérant que c'est dans tes projets !
Bravo, je trouve que tout y est, c'est drôle, hot, et surtout c'est Holmes et Watson !
| Umino Akiko chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
*blushing just a bit* Oh my that was... *coughs* lovely, dear. Where is chapter two?
| Becca chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This story was an over all good one, but I would like to point out some errors.
Fisrt, I didn't feel like I knew what was going on some of the time. The visual wasn't strong enough. To strengthen this, try adding detail about the enviroment and their postitions in the enviroment. Like, "I heard the wind rustling outside as I placed my book on the table..." ect..
Second, I found the characterization of Holmes to be a bit unbelievable, but that will come with time. Just write and review your work to fix that.
Lastly, there were a few grammatical errors, but I don't think people will mind ;)
Hope to see more SW from you sometime!