Reviews for Family Business
Guest chapter 12 . 1/3
Jeez...Judai is considered the niave one of the group..more so than Sho!
Guest chapter 12 . 1/3
PipeDream chapter 9 . 1/3
Jesus Christ that's intense
Hell of a lot of detail on Johan's condition there...
Also, it's 'Aibou' even though the way it's pronounced seems like Aribou
Just thought you might want to know ffr
Guest chapter 5 . 1/3
Jazzelyn, Jazz Fenton, holy crap I just got that
PipeDream chapter 4 . 1/3
Uh, heads up, unlike the other crystal beasts the animal doesn't go after the gem, or at all for Rubi - a carbuncle isn't a creature, it's a word for a type of big gem, like a garnet or Ruby. I thought it was wierd watching it, and kind of misleading, as in this case
Guest chapter 2 . 1/3
Why is this all underlined?!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
Seriously? Woah
Laura chapter 16 . 12/31/2012
Woah! 0_0

I almost feel sorry for them... Almost.

Great stor by the way. _
rainyRay chapter 16 . 6/10/2011
Ivory: DON'T FORGET US! *revs chainsaw*

Ebony: HELL YA! *brings out a pack of knives* Here's your explosives Ivory. *hands her some bombs and hand grenades*


Giese: NO!

LittleKuroNeko-nyan chapter 9 . 12/31/2010
actually its Aibou... not Aribou...
LittleKuroNeko-nyan chapter 2 . 12/31/2010
damn. shoulda made it 24. april 24 is my birthday. .
Sakural7865 chapter 16 . 11/9/2010
D*** IT! I missed the fun! Can't wait to move to the sequel!
Yukiko Shiroryuu chapter 16 . 9/5/2010
Yukiko: *hugs you* Arigato Kirei-san! I love this chapter soo much! You even put out my favorite shotgun! Beat that, Johan! I helped killed the men who tried to break you and Judai apart! I'm so happy! Arigato! I'll be seeing you in your next story! ;D

~Yukiko Shiroryuu~
CendrithePyroQueen chapter 16 . 9/5/2010
*laughs maniacly* we got to kill them! we got to kill them!

haruka: oh my god this chapter made our day!

chara: wonderful. absolutly wonderful it was amazing!

haruka: youve earned our respect! cant wait till the next one!
radbackflips chapter 16 . 9/4/2010
XDDD DANCE MONKEYS! DANCE! XD Best. Finishing Chapter. EVER! You're awesome, Kirei-chan!~~~ Luv you~!

If you're gonna write a sequel, can you do it quick? 'Coz I really wanna know what happens next 3 XD
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