|Reviews for Will of Foxfire|
| KitsuneTurner chapter 61 . 9/17/2013
Is there going to be a sequel to show us what happened to the kitsune babies? I love this story sooooo much!
| scarletwater chapter 6 . 8/4/2013
What a wonderfully written chapter. I'm really starting to like your Itachi and his personality in this story and I also love your use of Obito in this chapter. When Kakashi says "Obito showed him the fading chakra in it" and other phrases similar to that one it made it seem like Obito was actually there and that made it so much sadder. The ending was quite sad as well. But overall this chapter entrancing and I am now off to read the next chapter.
| mndstjohn chapter 61 . 7/11/2013
| kildar2010 chapter 61 . 7/11/2013
wow this story is truly awesome
have you considered writing a prequal?
| Nightwing chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
this is fun! I am having an awesome time reading this! congrats Author!
an avid reader
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Is the old wolf Minato
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 61 . 4/8/2013
Wow, just, wow. Second time I've read this story, and the characterization, the parallels to canon, working the inevitable fight scenes into the narrative seamlessly... It takes talent to come up with something like this, and dedication to keep it from falling apart in the process of writing it.
Thank you. - Matsuri
P.S. Ah, would it be alright if I took some background elements of this for an AU story I'm writing? As I said, I first read this ages ago, and in the re-reading, I realized I've taken a lot of inspiration from this and a few of your other MinaKushi AUs, and I really want to continue that story...
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
Yuudai is an $$hole. And worse things, only I can't think of curse words bad enough.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 4 . 4/7/2013
...Sasuke is exactly how he would have been without the massacre. Inferiority complex the size of Hokage Mountain, ego only slightly smaller, and with "impress my father" in place of "kill Itachi". Yay...
| Kintora chapter 42 . 3/4/2013
This chapter has got to be one of my favorite chapters by far! I couldn't help but come back and reread this whole story again. After trying (and mostly failing) to uncover more really good MinaKushi stories in which Naruto keeps both his parents, I finally decided that I had to come back to this again so I don't have to mope over bad endings. Been tearing through chapter after chapter like a literate roadrunner on steroids... I really should be working, but I can't seem to keep my eyes away.
But this is a good stopping point for now. I'll be finishing this within the next day or two at most. Again. For the umpteenth time, which will definitely not be the last of course. :)
| Antioch XX chapter 61 . 3/2/2013
Love your other stories can't believe it's taken me so long to get around to this one, great work as always.
Hope to see more of the Pokemon fusion soon.
| Rexnos chapter 61 . 2/16/2013
All in all very good. Your plot and your crazy new world were definitely the best parts of your story. Your characters were also very good. I was impressed in their variety and sheer number. It's difficult to give readers an accurate depiction of so many characters, but you did an excellent job with it. You also managed to incorporate many different view points fairly effectively. I feel like you could have used fewer and cranked up the dramatic tension a few degrees, but your choices still showed awesome writing prowess.
I'd suggest working on creating tension to be honest. It's the only real suggestion I can make. While the final battle was epic in scope, it seemed like an utter stomp the second that Minato got to work. The first third was exciting and interesting while the second two thirds was more mop up. Instead of feeling like an interesting new battle, it felt like a Naruto AU in which a great deal had changed and the heroes were more prepared.
Nevertheless, I really liked it in the end. While not perfect, no story is. Naruto's family situation was extremely interesting, and your world modifications really shook things up. I had a lot of fun reading this.
| flower.kat chapter 61 . 2/14/2013
LOVE! it was original and didn't cling to the original story line to the point of boredom! well done! and i look forward to the rest of your work :)
| Rexnos chapter 17 . 2/14/2013
I assumed in the beginning that everything wasn't quite what it seemed in regards to werewolves. Heck, I even figured it would end up being a major plot point of some sort. On the other hand, you did a really good job keeping all existence of kitsune very low key. It took until this very moment to realize that they're not only far from extinct, but also extremely plot relevant. Plot twists don't typically sneak up on me quite this well. Good work.
I've been enjoying this story greatly. It takes some serious balls to deviate almost entirely from canon like you've done here. With how intensely different everything is, about the only things you've taken from canon are a handful of jutsu and the existence of the Uchiha clan. With a handful of name changes and slight alterations in a half dozen places, this could be original fiction. This story has some real potential, so I'm just gonna get back to it.
| SpiketheCuddly chapter 22 . 12/26/2012