although I was all for Francis and Zoey, you wrote this very very well. Great job.

I really loved this. Great job! I like that sort of take on Nick, but I don't see it often.

This is a very nice story, I like how Francis and Nick interact and how protective Nick is when it comes to Rochelle.

The image of Nick hearing Francis upset Rochelle makes me laugh cause I picture Nick going at Francis with a chainsaw. XP

This is a great little story and hope you'll write more.

YAY its me again, I commented from DA. Lolz, again, jsut for everyone else who wants to see the reviews, its pretty cool, nicely detailed and well thought out.

I really love this short story, I do hope there are more to come. I love this over protective Nick and I think he would act like that towards Rochelle. Keep them coming! :)