Reviews for Fury's own Rifles
Tr1pp chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
Hello!

I do like the storyline; it is interesting and exciting, but I have only read one and a half chapter so far. I am sorry to say that I will not read anymore. Your bad grammar is killing me. It slows the reading down, it is annoying to have to re-read every other sentence to find out what you really did mean by it. One or two mistakes are no big deal, but it's getting unbearable. I'd be happy to read it all someday if/when you have proofread the text, because I didn't lie: I do like the story. A lot.
dragonshina chapter 4 . 6/18/2012
Looks promising.

We have seen a Navy Captain get into teh corps. Now we see an Army Lieutenetn do the same.

What year is in the story by the way?
BlueRingedUmbreon23 chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
This story is pretty good. The only problem grammatically is at a few points, you accidentally capitalized a few letters in the beginning. Keep up the good work.
YukinaAmonYoukai chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
good work keep it up