Reviews for Training Lessons
kinokoi chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
That was pretty cute!

I liked the way you interpreted the characters, and I also like your writing style, it's just easy and enjoyable to read xD
ej8012 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Nicely written, and well done in general. Good job.
Sw0rdmaster chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Cool! Nice to see you doing more writing involving SorenxMia, even if I opted IkexMia in my own writings, but still.

This flows and the characters and their interactions are done very well. I found myself drawn more into the developing relationship through the events that unfolded and the following results of said events. Both characters were portrayed well, from Soren's skepticism and coldness to Mia's perkiness and energy.

There were a few things, such as a grammar or spelling error here and there (ex:"manoeuvres" at the end). Also, I would imagine that Soren would start with something a bit lighter than a steel sword. It just seems a bit too much for the short sage to handle, but ultimately that's just a bit of a nitpick.

All in all, GREAT. I quite enjoyed it.
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 6/27/2010