Reviews for Moonlight
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
I love it. It is the most beautiful. please make more chapters I'm begging you.
RMNicki chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
loved it! I just read this book, and I was so mad when I read the end, and Griet was with Pieter rather than him, and vermeer dies! I mean, come on ! xD I'm a fan of forbidden love, but I like it better when it plays out in the end! ): Great job!
SheWolfMedjai chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
That would have been a better ending in my opinion.
Mara Hans chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
I literally waited for this to happen throughout the entire book i love how you did it!
Jane High chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
*sigh* If only, if only...Beautiful writing, I must say. Nothing cliche about it.
blackrose1901 chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
DEFINTELY AN M! it was very well written and plausible zpart from the fact that it didnt happen like that .. LOL!
Pale Treasures chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
This was beautiful and so touching. You captured Griet's thoughts and feelings and, I believe, how Vermeer secretly feels as well perfectly. Lovely. :)
TheShireOfAsgard chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Beautiful, I love the descriptions of the setting and the mood. I love it!
Arty Hazel Door chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
OK, this




ok "our bodies melt together" BS OK GET SOME WRITING SKILLS OR SOMETHING

AGlassyCountenance chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
That was very well done! Your style of writing is superb. How sad to think that this did not happen in the book.
phantomess212 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
very beautiful!:)3
lovelytl23 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I thought this was a sweet and pure love scene. I wouldn't even call it erotica, there was something so sincere in the characters and their budding love for each other. I was glad to read that she gave herself to the man she loved, and you can feel the sexual tension as the story continues. Good job! The only problem I found was the sentence that says " 'Oh,' I reply quietly, speechless." It just seemed like an awkward sentence... Either she can speak or not, if she can say "Oh", she may be a little addled, but she is not speechless. Good job on punctuation and grammar, sometimes it's difficult to pay attention to those details. I enjoyed your story and will be adding you as a fave author.
lotus-bugxm9 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Wow!X3 I loved this.
Auragrace chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
That was so sweet
linalove chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
This was very beautiful. Great job!

xxx Lina :)