|Reviews for Lovely Traces|
| Snowlily246 chapter 12 . 3/23/2012
Lov ur story!
| xXEmiShaeXx chapter 37 . 11/29/2011
LOL How very right Kiku is! Ayais definitely crazy alright!
haha I really enjoyed this chapter!
My favorite part though, was probably when Saki and Haru were in their own little world with the butterfly. Such an adorable couple.
Oh yeah. Screee and I were talking the other day about people who try to write fan fic while following the manga for Fruits Basket, with an OCXKyo (or Yuki,or even Haru), and how it's just super hard to write. You know, cause the managa's so complex, and Natsuki Takaya just ties everything together so nicely; there's no loose ends whatsoever. AND who can compete with Rin? Seriously. She's one of themost beautifullydrawn people in this manga...And she's just perfect for Haru.(Just like Machi is for Yuki)But, anyway, we were talking about this because Scree's favorite character is Haru and she wanted to write a fanfic that followed the manga, but it's just too hard...
ANYWAYS, after that REALLLLY long paragraph that basically consisted of psycho babble...
YOU'RE AMAZING KELS!
AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
~ XOXO EmiShae
| xXEmiShaeXx chapter 36 . 11/29/2011
And so...Ayame arrives! BWHAHAHAHAH!
I always love it when Aya shows up! He always makes things so...Interesting.
...Though, honestly...I don't think I'd be able to, uh,deal with him in person. -_-"
My favorite line in thischapter?
"I could practically hear the Psycho theme playing from some unknown place in the room. Possibly from Yuki's head."
Now THAT would be scarrrry!
Okay! Next chapter here I come!
~ XOXO EmiShae
| xXEmiShaeXx chapter 35 . 11/29/2011
I'M ALIVE! YES AND I'M CATCHING UP ON STUFF I SHOULD'VE READ MONTHS AGO.
So, I'm terribly sorry about these super late reviews.
Okay, This chapter was great! And I remember this. so they finally meet Akito, huh? Poor girls.
Well, off to the next chapter!
~ XOXO EmiShae
| Maddie.loves.furuba chapter 37 . 7/3/2011
Er...hi. It's been 3 months now. I missed this story a lot...I'M SORRY, I NEVER KNEW YOU UPDATED D8! Anyway, this chapter is awesome (as usual) and lol, I frickin love The Mabudachi Trio!
Mayday and Yellowcard 3 What are your favourite songs from both of 'em? From Mayday, mine are; "Terrible Things", "Miserable at best", "I swear this time I mean it", and "Three cheers for five years". "Only one" is one of my favourites from Yellowcard. OMG! Do you know Kuroshitsuji/Black Butler? I'm sorry if I already asked,but it's full of sexy men. XD
| Madskill101 chapter 37 . 6/17/2011
H3rro! I'm Madskill101 but you can call me skillz if u want but I wanted to say that I really enjoy reading your story! Also if you like horses I have lots of good stories to recommend to you! well i got to go Byee!
| britblueeyes13 chapter 37 . 5/12/2011
heyy! i just found time to start reading fanfiction again and i noticed your story. it seemed so familiar, then i saw the response to my review i sent you like forever ago -'' well any way down to business, i like your use of details and such in your work, and your chapters have gotten longer! 1000 awesome points for you! i love the kiku hyo moments theyre just so adorable! keep up the good work mi amor! (ah ayame and shigure how i love your quotes) byyee!
| saoriin chapter 37 . 4/30/2011
YESH! lol, i'm so sorry. i'm just a bit hyped up today sinced I finished my tests. i feel awsome! Anyway i'm glad you've been enjoying A Lost Flower. Thank you. And your character is perfect for it too! Thanks. I think her name shall be... HARUKA (遙, 遥, 悠, 遼): Japanese name meaning "distance."
MARI: Japanese form of English Mary, meaning "obstinacy, rebelliousness" or "their rebellion." Compare with another form of Mari.
RAN (蘭): Japanese name meaning "lily" or "orchid."
I'm still deciding though. 3 I love Ayame! Especially when Kyo wakes up with him in the bed, classic!
I wonder how Kiku, Miki and Saki's relationship with the Sohmas will blossom! I'll be updating my story soon! And you're character's profile shall be on my profile page!
| Quiet Harmony-chan chapter 37 . 4/29/2011
LOL! I loved this chapter! I'm glad you will continue! Though It will be hard for Sachiko when... Never mind. Keep up the good work!
| indescribable music chapter 37 . 4/29/2011
YES! Another Chapter!
| iwastetimechasingcars chapter 36 . 3/14/2011
Hello! Yeah, I've been procrastinating a lot. A LOT! I have a project due tomorrow, but I dcided to review your story because School sucks ass. Yeah... then my mom took my laptop away for getting in trouble with school and my birthday is today so I JUST got it back.
I'm really bad at this today.
Kiku: SHe was kinda like wanting to build a bridge between Yuki and Ayame... Hm... Lemme think...
Kiku: Fix You by Coldplay (like trying to fix their relationship)
Kyo: Hm... kinda freaked about Ayame... maybe...
Kyo: Keep it cool by Us Royalty (Gotta love indie) [Think of it like I don't even want to know why you're here Ayame]
Yuki: God. He is HARD. Um... um... um... um... um... shit...
Yuki: Mr. Big Shot by Anarbor [This should be reeeeaaaallllyyyy a give away. Like... yeah...]
Miki: Curse of Curves by Cute is What We Aim For [Just totally random]
Ayame: I Came 2 Party by Cinema Bizarre (Kinda like the way he came. And Shigure... is all... bleh...)
Sachi was really hard to do this time because of my stupid self. It was hard to get the vibe...
| Mila of the Seven Senses chapter 36 . 3/11/2011
Great chapter! Thanks for updating! Aaya is even crazier than I am! XD (Which is HARD.)... Random question (and probably unanswerable 'cause of spoilers) If you plan to include Rin in this story what's Saki gonna do (about Haru being in love with Rin and all that)? Wait...Yeah... That would be an insane spoiler... Never mind...But anyway, Love the chapter! Keep up the awesome writing! (I included many parentheses in this review didn't I? Oh well...)
-Mila of the Seven Senses
| Stabbythings chapter 36 . 3/9/2011
I love it and sorry for being so late I've been really busy and such.
| Quiet Harmony-chan chapter 36 . 3/3/2011
This was so awesome. LMAO. I thought this would turn out are you going to continue this. I mean after you finish the shows fom the anime are you going to the manga?
| saoriin chapter 36 . 3/1/2011
luv ur story! plz continue it...