Reviews for The Bloom of a Crystal Rose
JFETT52694 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Omg...its really good...please update
xXSummerSunXx chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
PLEASE UPDATE! This sounds really really really interesting! It's also well written...I didn't see any errors at all...PLEASE UPDATE! Don't abandon this beautiful masterpiece.
Electra Red chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
I LOVED IT! Yay another ongoing fang/vanille fanfic! I'm super excited you dont even know! :D anyways that was an awesome chapter and i cant wait for the next one. thanks and update soon please! :)
snoopster chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Hey, great story so far! One thing I've noticed is your use of ellipses. Use them sparingly in dialogue, and try to avoid them during narration, I think you would find that the story flows better that way and there are no awkward pauses.

Excellent writing otherwise! I'm looking forward to future chapters.
Ye chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Yeah that was awesome! I'm really pumped to see how this turns out. Thanks for creating this and letting us read it :)
Yallo chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Erm...

I apologize for reviewing as a flame,

but I assure you I enjoyed a well-written prologue.

Where was I?

Ah yes, review...

While I lean more towards FangxLight, I saw your story and thought 'Why not?'.

And let me tell ya, I certainly don't regret it.

I think you did well with the setting of the story and I was intrigued from the first paragraph.

(The lack of grammatical errors did wonders too.)

Hmm...

Will the maker come out again?

Her condescension irked me

D:

(Then again, if one possessed the power to create humans like Fang and Vanille, who wouldn't have a superiority complex? XD)

If there is one little point I wish to comment on,

it would be Vanille's usage of the word "ain't".

(Does she actually say that in the game?)

Not sure, but it seemed unnatural...

p.s. I think it's a good idea you made romance take a back-seat.

Heaven knows the countless fanfics that were ruined because the author didn't know how to contribute to this genre.

All in all, good work!

I look forward to your next update.